tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post2306455944409981160..comments2024-03-28T13:11:41.905+00:00Comments on Many-Eyed Hydra's Succubus Bordello: The Heart Squad (part 3)M.E. Hydrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-10195888211538128172018-02-28T15:54:12.986+00:002018-02-28T15:54:12.986+00:00This sounds like a great story so far but I have t...This sounds like a great story so far but I have to say that I really don't enjoy them as much when they are chopped up into tiny parts like this. Just like every other story, it takes a few minutes of reading for the atmospher to build and the reader to get into the flow of the tale. As soon as this starts to happen........"thats all folks. Tune in next time" To be honest. I think you are undoing a lot of your own hard work by fragmenting the story like this. It looses it's overall impact. Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358770691659930632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-40040510470201099192018-02-27T18:00:24.842+00:002018-02-27T18:00:24.842+00:00I forgot how much I enjoy your stories.I forgot how much I enjoy your stories.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-32202778902981766432018-02-27T08:00:21.734+00:002018-02-27T08:00:21.734+00:00I'm enjoying this very much~.I'm enjoying this very much~.Warrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191492713933826321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-39206601266295499302018-02-26T21:59:54.809+00:002018-02-26T21:59:54.809+00:00Well, u have hopes this, the story seems to be sha...Well, u have hopes this, the story seems to be shaping up nicely. <br /><br />But yes, damn teasing cliff chapterzGodNamedStevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709253847823490802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-10971675797601346582018-02-26T15:58:32.632+00:002018-02-26T15:58:32.632+00:00I want to tear into this story.. this is such a t...I want to tear into this story.. this is such a tease! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com