tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post2551791068047196285..comments2024-03-28T22:00:11.073+00:00Comments on Many-Eyed Hydra's Succubus Bordello: Succubus Summoning 101: ExcerptM.E. Hydrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-76257728213387096132012-02-11T20:15:20.336+00:002012-02-11T20:15:20.336+00:00I can't say too much as what 'Master' ...I can't say too much as what 'Master' actually means will be a recurring puzzle throughout the series. Nyte's morality is alien, but consistent. You'll see in future chapters.M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-20764344279195745432012-02-04T23:09:10.954+00:002012-02-04T23:09:10.954+00:00M.E. I understand that "Master" doesn...M.E. I understand that "Master" doesn't necessarily mean what we think it means. My question was did Nyte's knowledge of Phil influence her decision of liking him, or was it his own actions in 109, not screaming despite being in immense pain, that endeared him to her?Warrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191492713933826321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-88628230389882584592012-02-04T04:05:43.332+00:002012-02-04T04:05:43.332+00:00Hi.
1. "Master" doesn't necessarily...Hi.<br /><br />1. "Master" doesn't necessarily mean what we think it means.<br /><br />2. The novel version has tighter editing and I removed the recaps from the beginning of each chapter as they're only needed for a monthly serial. There's also some extra scenes featuring Phil and the Wargsnouts staff that adds a little more worldbuilding.<br /><br />3. The bedmistress and friends have important roles in 201 ;)M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-44540663177045698192012-02-04T03:54:57.905+00:002012-02-04T03:54:57.905+00:001. Hey M.E., Rosa says in 109 that Nyte liked Phil...1. Hey M.E., Rosa says in 109 that Nyte liked Phil, and thus that was the reason why despite being chained up he hadn't had his arms broken. However we later find out in 114 that the ritual was a success and Phil was their master. Did that factor in any way to how Nyte would treat him in 109, despite him not knowing about being their master? Or did such a thing not really factor into how she would've treated him in 109?<br /><br />2. Regarding your novels and the stories you've posted up on websites, are there any differences in the website version story compared to the novel version story, like more content in the novel story or whatever?<br /><br />3. If you do have Phil and Nyte get some alone time, I think an interesting conflict at the beginning would be to have that "Bedmistress of the Palace of Infernal and Iniquitous pleasures" featured in 201 encounter Phil and Nyte. Then they (Nyte and the Bedmistress) start snarking at each other about what constitutes pleasure, before deciding Phil should choose. I suspect he'd choose Nyte, not just because she'd probably do unspeakable things to him for slighting/rejecting her, but also because Nyte seems to treat him as more than just someone to be "milked like a cow."Warrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191492713933826321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-35149340831347855722012-02-04T03:02:52.024+00:002012-02-04T03:02:52.024+00:00Yeah, that was my blunder. It's the first tim...Yeah, that was my blunder. It's the first time I've been involved on the uploading side and I missed off updating one of the fields in the upload form. Should be fixed nowM.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-35039571953304800942012-02-04T03:00:21.745+00:002012-02-04T03:00:21.745+00:00Lesson titles. It's supposed to be laid out l...Lesson titles. It's supposed to be laid out like a university/college time table for an extended day.<br /><br />Most of them have ambiguous or dual meaning. Think Contract.M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-27069773389333085302012-02-04T02:55:17.625+00:002012-02-04T02:55:17.625+00:00I'm not sure Phil would be too thrilled with t...I'm not sure Phil would be too thrilled with that! :) It's not up yet, but 203 does feature Nyte having some fun with another hapless Wargsnouts student.M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-22630266986315314422012-02-03T23:05:30.894+00:002012-02-03T23:05:30.894+00:00Hm. It's still listed as "Coming soon&quo...Hm. It's still listed as "Coming soon" on Excessica...Jimmy the Cannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18412998619526224619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-86963860263900445432012-02-03T22:16:04.979+00:002012-02-03T22:16:04.979+00:00Congratulations once again on publishing your nove...Congratulations once again on publishing your novel. One question though: what's up with the chapter titles? I understand what they mean (I think), but I'm wondering if you were aiming for a specific effect/theme/whatever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-29984815868435143432012-02-03T12:10:36.963+00:002012-02-03T12:10:36.963+00:00I'm intensely happy to see this! Soon Succubus...I'm intensely happy to see this! Soon Succubus Summoning 203 will come! Man I hope in it can we can see Nyte and Phil have some alone time together. Just the two of them.Warrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191492713933826321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-47515267651060601192012-02-02T06:46:58.966+00:002012-02-02T06:46:58.966+00:00Looking forward to it! I can finally replace the o...Looking forward to it! I can finally replace the one I put together in Microsoft Word from all the separate chapters, and moved onto my e-reader...Jimmy the Cannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18412998619526224619noreply@blogger.com