tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post378812312994669759..comments2024-03-13T21:27:53.663+00:00Comments on Many-Eyed Hydra's Succubus Bordello: Succubus Summoning 207 and Plot vs PornM.E. Hydrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-8333126840634877822013-09-02T03:49:00.544+01:002013-09-02T03:49:00.544+01:00Thanks! I like to keep readers on their toes. Ne...Thanks! I like to keep readers on their toes. Never know what's coming next! :)M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-69677146841068722162013-09-02T03:48:08.859+01:002013-09-02T03:48:08.859+01:00I think Phil will pick up a few new skills and abi...I think Phil will pick up a few new skills and abilities. ;)M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-66958633664362011612013-08-28T15:47:29.699+01:002013-08-28T15:47:29.699+01:00I haven't continued reading the series from 20...I haven't continued reading the series from 201 on yet (read the 100s back in 2011).<br /><br />Since it is a rather long series based in a world that you are outlining and shaping over tens of thousands of words, I think there is definitely a necessity for plot and rule/lore heavy installments. Otherwise you end up with characters who feel like cartoon characters in their simplicity (only one or two revealed defining personality traits, rules limiting, or drives guiding them) or a world too similar to our own to make it interesting enough to make up for weak characters (For example, zombie apocalypse style media tends to rely on world rather then characters). <br /><br />Since the saga is as large as it is, id take any bitching that there is "too much lore/plot" as a positive thing. Its a long haul world your creating, not a wham-bam drained you man thing. <br /><br />As for people not feeling the sex scene, Ive read most of your work on literotica and some on here. Your variability is interesting to me, I like that you test and try things even if you know they are going to be less well received by the general public. What makes it noteworthy is you dip into it, but unlike many you keep it classy (off the top of my head a fecal bubble from a dragon comes to mind, a monster pink flesh orgy, you touched furries in a good way, and I know Ive seen piss play somewhere in there. Not to mention routinely murdering protagonist). Makes you unique enough to keep an eye on.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13320889941633714418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-83917532281295911392013-08-25T19:26:52.373+01:002013-08-25T19:26:52.373+01:00I am definitely one of the people interested with ...I am definitely one of the people interested with plot to go with my erotica.<br /><br />If your open to suggestions can you put in some permanent power upgrades for Phil at some point preferably with some hilarious side effects :D It only makes sense for the succubi to do stuff to make Phil more ... durable :PMallixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07295931864679396885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-64496818040214361132013-08-14T03:09:07.831+01:002013-08-14T03:09:07.831+01:00203 and 207 are the main exposition chunks. Norma...203 and 207 are the main exposition chunks. Normally I'd have a better balance of plot/porn, but those 2 chapters were both beefy on the background/introducing new character.<br /><br />(although it was 205 that sat around unfinished while the story was on that long hiatus)M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-3810133145215408372013-08-14T03:05:23.728+01:002013-08-14T03:05:23.728+01:00Cheers! Next chapter will be normal(ish) succubus...Cheers! Next chapter will be normal(ish) succubus fucking.M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-68969886474980119712013-08-12T23:47:42.668+01:002013-08-12T23:47:42.668+01:00First I really would not worry about one negative ...First I really would not worry about one negative comment, especially since it is only a exclamation and does not contain any actual suggestions for improvement... That is not a true review, that's trolling.<br /><br />Second, I think plot is very necessary for multi chapter series like this. I can forgive a lack of plot in a short oneshots (if it's really hot :D ) but anything longer would imo be boring without it.<br />This chapter actually answered a lot questions I had (yes, I actually ponder about stuff in erotic literature)... So yeah, plot is good... The rule for at least one sex scene in every chapter is of course good too.<br /><br />And while I prefer the normal succubish fucking too, I definitely enjoyed this as well.<br /><br />Looking forward to the next! Cheers!<br /><br />Ternomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11492624728928779741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-20670400520334170712013-08-12T18:32:26.803+01:002013-08-12T18:32:26.803+01:00That said, the writing was still stellar, it was j...That said, the writing was still stellar, it was just this time it was more of an exposition piece than a sucky-fucky-die-bye (as Malcolm Tucker would probably call it were he Wargsnouts' head of comms).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-83365948528850817462013-08-12T18:23:27.304+01:002013-08-12T18:23:27.304+01:00I have to be honest and say the giant psychic demo...I have to be honest and say the giant psychic demon didn't do it for me either, but I'd rather you keep having new ideas including something I (as one reader) don't find appealing, than churn out nothing but chicks with wings (very nice as they are).<br /><br />...did like the idea of her literally turning Phil on though!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-36734450255823281112013-08-12T04:01:47.837+01:002013-08-12T04:01:47.837+01:00;);)M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-37278100629068649282013-08-12T03:23:53.996+01:002013-08-12T03:23:53.996+01:00So, someday possibly but not now. :-)So, someday possibly but not now. :-)Jimmy the Cannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18412998619526224619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-16882746968861364862013-08-12T02:30:18.971+01:002013-08-12T02:30:18.971+01:00I think I gave up on that being a hot sex scene wh...I think I gave up on that being a hot sex scene when she insisted on pushing tendrils into Phil's brain. :)M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-332070615415204362013-08-12T02:27:28.089+01:002013-08-12T02:27:28.089+01:00Going to hold that back for now.Going to hold that back for now.M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-26602003074081479402013-08-12T02:27:11.743+01:002013-08-12T02:27:11.743+01:00Hehe. Not changing anything. I included the comm...Hehe. Not changing anything. I included the comment more for the amusement. Pretty much every writer on Lit gets comments like that. I'm surprised I don't get more considering some of the directions my stories head off in! :)M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-30514265375093813602013-08-11T13:26:05.922+01:002013-08-11T13:26:05.922+01:00I thought the combination of porn and plot was fin...I thought the combination of porn and plot was fine, but I wasn't really into the giant jelly girl. As Civildeviation said, though, I'd rather you keep experimenting than trying to play it safe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-85511697312504383632013-08-11T07:32:02.425+01:002013-08-11T07:32:02.425+01:00It was interesting to see another reference to tha...It was interesting to see another reference to that memory Phil held on to. Are we ever going to see what that memory is?Jimmy the Cannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18412998619526224619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-65894978022843184592013-08-11T03:54:05.341+01:002013-08-11T03:54:05.341+01:00As I stated on literotica, the "limp dick&quo...As I stated on literotica, the "limp dick" comment was likely more do to pacing/length of the end sex scene and not a reflection of the cerebral content or the expanded style. <br /><br />Adjusting those "hit" elements because a "base" troll couldn't get their jollies is giving wayyy to much power to that person! Especially since he likely already tanked the rating of your story by abusing the inflation in Literotica's gradient rating system.<br /><br />So Hydra, do your fans a favor and keep experimenting with your art. If you change anything, give a nod to limp dick by having Nyte give a "special kiss" in the next story. <br />Civildeviationhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01676636824951510626noreply@blogger.com