tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post4226756107286915420..comments2024-03-28T13:11:41.905+00:00Comments on Many-Eyed Hydra's Succubus Bordello: Many-Eyed Hydra makes a Monster Girl Hentai Game: CYOA with Twine (part 2)M.E. Hydrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-56039963249017860252015-01-03T01:02:24.112+00:002015-01-03T01:02:24.112+00:00Huh. It stopped using the captcha for me a while b...Huh. It stopped using the captcha for me a while back... maybe they stopped it for logged in names but stepped it up for anonymous ones?Jimmy the Cannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18412998619526224619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-92176112007392195382015-01-02T12:34:00.119+00:002015-01-02T12:34:00.119+00:00awesome idea hydra cannot wait how it turns out an...awesome idea hydra cannot wait how it turns out and as always we expect only the sexiest succubi you can findAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-43668161776106978162015-01-02T11:47:15.626+00:002015-01-02T11:47:15.626+00:001: Oops, yes. Definite post-NYE beers brain fart t...1: Oops, yes. Definite post-NYE beers brain fart there. Corrected now. :)<br /><br />2: Good point. Currently I'm treating this as a practise run to get familiar with the tools. Expect it to change to "A Night with a Sexy Succubus" or "Temptations of a Sexy Succubus" if I want to push it further. ;)<br /><br />3: This is a trickier point. I cut most of King's thoughts from the original for this reason. The problem with cutting out words like "bland" is it either leaves the descriptions looking very flat or they become unnecessarily bloated as the writer uses four times as many words to show that the picture is bland.<br /><br />Not sure about the captcha. I didn't even know blogspot was using them to be honest.<br /><br />Thanks for feedback.M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-50302910667719618802015-01-02T09:28:05.636+00:002015-01-02T09:28:05.636+00:00Nice so far. But three things.
First: "You d...Nice so far. But three things.<br /><br />First: "You do etc" is second person, not first ;).<br /><br />Second: I wouldn't recommend using something like "Ceptophthorié" in your title. Aside from possible problems in displaying (don't know the program), how are people to memorize it or google for something this complicated?<br /><br />Third: You shouldn't be that descriptive of the thoughts of the PC. Rather than say the pictures are "bland", describe them with more details, so the reader comes to the conclusion himself, that they are bland. Same with the description of the succubus (as said, name is to long and complicated). You are already describing not only the look of her, but also the impression she gives off, while it's actually the readers "job" to determine himself, what he thinks of her. This is not a story you tell, but a game where you want the reader/player/user to participate.<br /><br />P.S.: Is it just me, or is this Anonymous captcha getting increasingly shitty? Had even to Switch from Firefox to IE to get it to work...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-22259938315720826932015-01-02T05:48:05.824+00:002015-01-02T05:48:05.824+00:00Very Impressive start which can always be hard whe...Very Impressive start which can always be hard when writing or making games. Keep up the great work I can't wait to play it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-81784030107640047222015-01-01T17:20:40.069+00:002015-01-01T17:20:40.069+00:00A great start! I hope your momentum will continue...A great start! I hope your momentum will continue!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com