tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post8268163682426021160..comments2024-03-13T21:27:53.663+00:00Comments on Many-Eyed Hydra's Succubus Bordello: Why Succubus Summoning 213 isn't up on LiteroticaM.E. Hydrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-61033748641089721562016-07-28T08:28:13.073+01:002016-07-28T08:28:13.073+01:00Mjm202036, what is your email?Mjm202036, what is your email?Warrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191492713933826321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-62436139465876197292016-07-27T01:28:08.374+01:002016-07-27T01:28:08.374+01:00Ok I really need to start writing things down that...Ok I really need to start writing things down that I have questions about...<br /><br />First of all, Verde seems to be the most mentioned of the succubi. She seems to help Phil along more than the rest of them. Waiting for Phil to decide about living in 101 arc longer than normal. In 201 arc she brings continues to hope for him by giving Phil her energy until he gets a new body from the plant lady. Then She smothers him in kisses. She seems to really have feelings for Phil than the other succubi. The only other Deakin that show that kind of concern for Phil is carny.<br /><br />Annd oh by the way would like to hear a story about how carny became the way he is.<br /><br />I get the feeling that as the story continues Verde and Phil may fall in love. That makes things interesting....<br /><br />I know that HYDRA doesn't give things away as he said just looking for other input to see if i am off my rocker on this one.Mystrianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10940705961530959867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-65523789050081273532016-07-26T09:35:24.360+01:002016-07-26T09:35:24.360+01:00I agree with Casey that the scene did end too fast...I agree with Casey that the scene did end too fast. Perhaps the final edit just needs the tease part extended a little while Phil is fighting through the lust before casting the spell.<br /><br />all in all it's great to see Phil stand up for himself finally Yshomatsuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03094139673856297195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-12452348923556821982016-07-26T02:14:53.506+01:002016-07-26T02:14:53.506+01:00Yshomatsu and Warren, I hope to get back to writin...Yshomatsu and Warren, I hope to get back to writing too. It's a bit hard, now that I've started my new career of driving a tractor trailer. A lot of hours behind the wheel and not a lot for the computer. Even this is typed out on my Kindle.mjm202036https://www.blogger.com/profile/09899738964372103943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-82031161576608721672016-07-26T01:39:43.421+01:002016-07-26T01:39:43.421+01:00Got your email. Thanks for it. Will respond later....Got your email. Thanks for it. Will respond later.Warrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191492713933826321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-80360702035369290782016-07-25T20:15:15.441+01:002016-07-25T20:15:15.441+01:00Hiya, cheers for the feedback. The main problem w...Hiya, cheers for the feedback. The main problem with extending the fight is while I've been dropping a few hints that Phil isn't quite as incompetent as he thinks he is, he's not strong enough to beat Astrapia in a straight fight. As Carny points out in an earlier chapter - Warlocks summon daemons to fight for them as warlock vs daemon usually ends up with the warlock getting squished. Within those constraints I went for the ending I thought fitted, even though it's a little light on the sex and action. I'll keep thinking about it, so I wouldn't be surprised if things are slightly different when the novel comes out.M.E. Hydrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01344522516345219776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-10401167234593496682016-07-25T17:19:13.922+01:002016-07-25T17:19:13.922+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433486566694060100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-43531095318722411432016-07-25T13:18:15.621+01:002016-07-25T13:18:15.621+01:00Okay so let's see the reason why. Hopefully it...Okay so let's see the reason why. Hopefully it was a mistake on their part with the staff, if not then well I'll save my thoughts until everything is out on what happened.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02528135196018217471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-29430144711662772672016-07-25T08:49:28.957+01:002016-07-25T08:49:28.957+01:00Not much to talk about, as long as we don't kn...Not much to talk about, as long as we don't know WHY it was rejected...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-61612499895996913042016-07-25T08:20:14.893+01:002016-07-25T08:20:14.893+01:00I emailed you earlier today, sorry your email got ...I emailed you earlier today, sorry your email got lost in my junk folderYshomatsuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03094139673856297195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-8747967945404237682016-07-25T06:28:40.242+01:002016-07-25T06:28:40.242+01:00No wonder I'm not seeing any new content. The...No wonder I'm not seeing any new content. The editors are too busy silencing good stories.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-25635126413628660052016-07-25T04:59:10.181+01:002016-07-25T04:59:10.181+01:00Don't you have your own website to post your s...Don't you have your own website to post your stories on?<br /><br />As for you Yshomatsu, how are you doing regarding writing? Anything lewd and new regarding succubi coming from the depths of your mind and soul? :PWarrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191492713933826321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-86205115604122239252016-07-25T04:17:38.803+01:002016-07-25T04:17:38.803+01:00I'm still hoping that you start writing again,...I'm still hoping that you start writing again, regardless of where it gets posted or sold!!Yshomatsuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03094139673856297195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-49755979340321071222016-07-25T03:09:42.798+01:002016-07-25T03:09:42.798+01:00Agree with anon 2.
Please tell us the juicy detai...Agree with anon 2.<br /><br />Please tell us the juicy details. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-45866330629638798682016-07-25T00:39:29.645+01:002016-07-25T00:39:29.645+01:00This is one of the reasons I quit writing. I found...This is one of the reasons I quit writing. I found out nearly all of the stories posted on Literotica go thru a volunteer editor. I had one rejected because the "editor" insisted my story go through their editor staff before they would let it post.mjm202036https://www.blogger.com/profile/09899738964372103943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-48116730665011666882016-07-24T23:39:39.306+01:002016-07-24T23:39:39.306+01:00What was the reason given?What was the reason given?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-78696481874220333402016-07-24T21:30:17.175+01:002016-07-24T21:30:17.175+01:00Need your own site! Time to look at making a Patre...Need your own site! Time to look at making a Patreon and your own forums and site to build up your Erotic Horror fanbase.l3loodKnighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17036158176100045173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-36340159866109892402016-07-24T21:16:27.741+01:002016-07-24T21:16:27.741+01:00Honestly, if you were to write novel length sequel...Honestly, if you were to write novel length sequels to the SS arc I'd literally throw my $$$ at you. I have been supporting you by buying a few of your ebooks for now though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3058415924232091761.post-74787432483689138662016-07-24T20:53:44.987+01:002016-07-24T20:53:44.987+01:00Interesting... Literotica doesn't know what tr...Interesting... Literotica doesn't know what true story writing is. Might be for the best though making more people come here and buy the book instead of getting your hard work for free.Mystrianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10940705961530959867noreply@blogger.com