Carrying on with where the inspiration came from for the stories from my first collection, A Succubus for Christmas.
This was the first story I submitted to Literotica. It’s another old fantasy of mine. For the early stories the plots were usually excuses to set up a twisted sex scene with hot demonesses. Koontz’s unconventional appearance was inspired by news stories of a real life mob boss (think it might have been Vincent Gigante) walking around outside in nothing more than a bathrobe to make the authorities think he was crazy. The idea of a mob boss with a harem of succubi at his command seemed too good not to use again, and so Koontz became another of my regular characters.
Pool of the Undine
Another story inspired by a monster girl picture I’d seen online, this time of a slime girl. The weird cave out in the moors seemed like a nice location for her to hide.
Slayer vs. Succubus
This was intended as an affectionate subversion of the classic eighties action hero stereotype. I love those films even though it’s obvious anyone behaving like that in real life would most likely fuck everything up epically. Super virile action hero versus infernal mistress of temptation was never going to end well in my universe. This is a story I’m torn on. It’s fun, but it’s also very goofy. Quite a few readers let me know they liked this one and I try to remind myself to write similar stories every so often to break up the flow of grimdark ones.
This one is unique to this collection. I’d wanted to do an Arachne story for a while, but unlike succubi, which are easy to hide in a modern-day setting, a demon with the lower body of a giant spider is a little more noticeable. I made her a dream demon to get around this. The non-sex part of the story was inspired by a real life (and tragic) news story of an otherwise successful Brit going on the run in the states after shooting his wife.
The writing of it is another story. Selena Kitt spotted my work on Literotica and encouraged me to put a collection together for publication through eXcessica. I knew it would crazy to expect people to pay for work that was already available for free online, so I decided to include at least one original story (ideally a novella) for the folks prepared to part with their cash. That was this one and it ended up being a complete bitch to write. I suspect this was because I knew I was writing something for publication rather than fun and some of those old niggling writer doubts about being good enough had resurfaced to fuck around with my productivity.
I hated the story at the time. It was only when I came back later I saw how nicely the concepts and imagery (the way she ‘eats’ the memories of his past loves and replaces them with her) came together. It’s my favourite of the collection. It might make a decent horror film as well (hint hint, for anyone out there with experience of making such things).
I'll finish off with the last five stories on Friday.