Um, yeah, right. I didn’t realise I picked this horror story up from IKEA, or that I’d have to head out into the forest and chop the wood myself.
Sometimes it’s right for the story and other times the Fade to Black to preserve a reader’s delicate sensibilities can feel like a cop out. Lovecraft famously left the finer details of his eldritch abominations to be filled in by the reader, usually because his protagonist’s mind had already disintegrated by that point, but there was at least enough for Chaosium to fill Call of Cthulhu bestiaries with some weird and wonderful critters.
If you’ve got an imagination you might as well use it. Sometimes that’s what the reader is expecting and wants. Especially in erotica, where drawing the curtain across before getting to the juicy squelchy parts is firmly disapproved of.
Hence this outpouring from the noxious regions of my mind:
“And not only with each other: Trent saw humans caught up in the bacchanalian frenzy. The demons used them like toys made of flesh. He watched as a plump demon with the glistening black skin of a leech embrace a muscular man. The over-cushioned lips of her vagina sucked in the man’s penis, sucked, and the man’s skin was torn away like pink tissue sliding over a raw hunk of meat. A fiend with the head of a fish rammed a cock the length and girth of a moray eel into the vagina of a petite little blonde girl doubled over in front of it. It pushed hips forward and the belly, then whole body of the girl swelled up like a water-filled balloon, swelled up until her eyes bulged, swelled up until something ruptured and white froth tinged with pink poured from her mouth and she deflated like a punctured blow-up doll. A skinny man struggled in the midst of a group of twisted little goblins. They drove penises hard like pointed horns into his anus, his mouth, his ears, even his eye sockets. They tore flesh from the man in ragged strips and wrapped the glistening red bundles of muscle around their cocks and masturbated with them. A slack-faced woman lay wrapped in the tentacles of some kind of abomination with the upper body of a woman and lower body of a deep-sea nightmare aberration. The demon’s sinuous arms terminated not in hands but in obscene appendages that resembled the mouths of lampreys. She fastened them to the woman’s tits and mewled in delight as more of her tentacles slithered up between her captive’s bleeding labia.”
It was originally a two sentence description. Then I thought, no, that’s not good enough. They’ll want examples.
(Don’t ask where the examples came from. I try not to think about it.)
The full story can be found here on Eka’s Portal.
Eka’s Portal is an online Vore community. Most aspects of Vore don’t appeal to me as a fetish, but there is some crossover with some of the succubus/monster girl stories I write. It also hits that Erotic Horror sweet spot where arousal, disgust and fear smoosh together in a big gooey ball.
It’s been a while since I posted anything there, so I thought a little hell-space story might make up for it and show I’m still writing and alive. Enjoy!
As always, if you like the story and haven’t already picked them up, please consider giving some of my books a look. You’ll like them.
Hey hydra, I was wondering if you took commissions. It seems like a good way to bring in a bit of cash and I'm sure many people would pay to have you churn out some sexy goodness. I would particularly like to see a continuation of the Succubus 101 series like everyone and their dog.
ReplyDeleteSpare time is more of an issue for me. I'd be hopeless with commissions as I never write the things I'm actually supposed to be writing. I'm still trying to find a way to trick my brain into focusing solely on Succubus Summoning. Spreading the word on the books is all I need.
ReplyDeleteSidetracking from something I'm supposed to be concentrating on is the bane of my existence. I find that, although I think of stories that burn white-hot trails across my imagination, I can never get them down on paper exactly how I want them. Do you ever have that problem? (also, as with contemplating quickly impending death, possibly losing money for a lost commission sharpens the mind wonderfully)
DeleteHeya Mr. Hydra up freedom and halloween the other day- happily enjoying them when I've the time!
ReplyDeleteat a bookstore the other day-heard some talk about 50 shades, they said; "it's funny because there's no male erotica ever." They've NO idea hehe.
Aaaand I know you've little time but please let us enjoy Nyte's sexy legs and feet more~ Demon hooves make me angry and i was elated Nyte's got sinister boots for her feetsies~
You do horrifically arousing, satisfying writing!
Hi and thanks. I'm the erotica of the underground(world?) :)
DeleteNyte definitely has sexy feet and legs, but I'm not sure it's safe to let her near soft dangly bits in stiletto heels. The results might be a little...wince inducing. I haven't got around to writing a proper 'foot' story yet. Time to put the little evil cells in motion...
Regarding Nyte's sexy feet and legs, will Phil be enjoying them?
DeleteActually what do you have planned for Phil? Any more Phil sandwiches or Cerulea and Phil having some alone time in that Arabian Nights grotto in the chapter she debuted in? Maybe some fun in the bath perhaps.
Hm. Considering how Cerulea can mess with the mind, it makes me wonder if she could do something like a Twin Threesome Fantasy (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TwinThreesomeFantasy)? Like could she use her powers or whatever to create a clone/doppelganger of herself?
DeleteMany fighting games have what's called a Doppelganger Attack (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/DoppelgangerAttack), but I wonder if something like that could be turned to more carnal purposes.
An example of a succubus having such an ability, at least currently published is Morrigan Aensland from Capcom's Darkstalkers fighting games, though strangely I haven't seen any erotica/lemons that involve that use of her powers.
Plans for 201 involve adding a few more monster girls like Puff and Pfaffle to go with the succubi. I've already written a scene with a spider-girl. The other succubi also get to play with some of the other students in more detail (not so good for the students, but they enjoy it at least!)
DeleteGood call on Morrigan's Doppelganger attack. I'm surprised writers/artists haven't made more use of that. Seems like it could be really sexy. Cerulea could do it, but I already have her scenes planned out. I might see if I can work into a story at some point.
Hey considering the succubi, the wizards, and the various mother magical elements in your stories, are you fan of urban fantasy like the Dresden Files or Nightside?
ReplyDeleteI've been meaning to check out the Dresden files at some point.
DeleteI'm more of a horror hound than a fan of urban fantasy. Too many carbon-copy vamp and woof books.
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Delete1, The Dresden Files are great in my opinion. They're popcorn books, the author himself has no illusions about them in that sense. Word of warning: the first two books are typically mentioned as not being the best. Even the author considers sub-par and feels new readers should start from the 3rd book at least, but if you want to you can.
ReplyDeleteHere is a website that contains all Butcher's books up to the 12th book. The 13th and 14th books aren't on there. It also contains all of Butcher's fantasy series, Codex Alera, which is a mixture of Pokemon, Romans, and Zerg:
http://www.e-reading.org.ua/bookbyauthor.php?author=19179
2. Judging by your response to my "Doppelganger" question, you seem to be familiar with Morrigan, and from your stories hentai and anime in general. I was a little worried at first that you wouldn't understand my reference, but I'm happy.
That brings me to my question: can you write a fanfiction with Morrigan, and possibly Lilith as well, using her/their doppelganger ability for erotic play with a victim. I've seen stories that featured Morrigan, but oddly not Lilith as well, on Literotica but I've never seen anyone utilize their doppelganger abilities for erotic encounters.
Another interesting thing about Morrigan and Lilith is how their wings can shapeshift into various items and poses.
I don't do conventional fan fiction as it makes it hard to use the story anywhere else.
DeleteThe "Jackson in HRPG-World" series is an affectionate (and X-rated parody) of various games. A character similar to Morrigan is almost certain to appear at some point. Maybe Lilith too.
What makes it hard in your opinion? Is it things like having established personalities and such?
ReplyDeleteSomeone else's character. I could write a fanfic on it, but I wouldn't be able to include it in a collection and sell it on amazon because of copyright/trademark issues. I've always avoided fanfic because I want my writing to be mine, to do what I like with, and that's not possible when you take other people's characters (unless their creators are long dead and even then it feels too much like cheating).
DeleteYeah I can see that.
DeleteOne last question then: can all of the succubi, by which I mean Verde, Rosa, Nyte, Nurse Honey, Cerulea, in Succubus Summoning 101 do that clone/doppelganger thing since you mentioned Cerulea can do it? Or is it only Cerulea is the only one who has that clone/doppelganger ability?
Cerulea for certain. The others, probably not. I've a good idea what I want their specialities to be and it seems like something best used as a speciality, although it's not set in stone. I tend to set their abilities according to what I need with an eye to making sure they don't get too Sue-ish, ie too powerful.
DeleteThe Annette Brite's gaseous succubus from "Come on the Candle" uses it a little in that story. I might push it further in a follow-up story.