Friday, August 12, 2016

H-space MGB Profile: Red Lips Succubus

Name: Red Lips Succubus
Type: Succubus
Habitat: Wide-ranging, but thankfully rare.

Description:
Another of the succubus-type HSIOs that resemble (and are likely the originators of) the devil girls of myth.  They take the appearance of extremely alluring women, but with the additional 'devil' features of horns, tail and leathery bat wings.

These succubi have very pale, almost white, skin.  Their main identifying feature is their lips, which are full, sensual and a vivid scarlet in colour that contrasts sharply with their pale skin.  This coloration appears to be natural pigmentation despite looking like artificial lip gloss.

Attack Strategy:
This is one of the more powerful succubus types.  They are extremely dangerous because of their ability to mesmerise and completely immobilise opponents with their lips.  We don't really know how this works.  There is a theory that the combination of the shape, coloration and the way the lips stand out from the rest of the succubus's pale face triggers a weird neural reaction in the human brain that causes it to partially shut down and lock up all conscious movement, causing paralysis in the onlooker.  However the succubus does this, it is terrifyingly effective, with a single blown kiss being enough to incapacitate an entire squad.

As with other H-space succubi, the red lips variant feeds on the fluids and energy released during sexual activity.  Red lips succubi prefer to use either fellatio or cunnilingus, and are capable of sucking their prey completely dry in a frighteningly short space of time.

Countermeasures:
What do you want me to put here?

Did you read the part where I wrote they are capable of immobilising an entire squad simply by blowing a kiss at them?

How are we supposed to counteract that?

What do you want me to do?  Tell the men to wear blindfolds just so the succubi can drain them dry in other immoral and indecent ways?

I can't even get them to understand the dangers they face from the minor HSIOs.  When I tried to warn them about this new type of succubus they were too busy laughing at the concept of being blowjobbed to death.

This is hopeless.  We warn the men.  They don't listen.  We send them out and the succubi kill them.  Then we bring in a fresh batch to start the cycle anew.

When is this going to end?

Threat Level:
They can take out a combat-ready soldier using nothing more than a blown kiss!  This is what we are facing out here.

Very high.

29 comments:

  1. To paraphrase a certain recent indie videogame:

    "The poor doctor, I fear his long-standing duties here have... affected him."

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  2. The Doctor thats making these profiles is probably the only sane one left. The soldiers just laugh at the supposed danger and the leadership just throws more bodies into the world not caring about loses.

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  3. Shit just got real! I can't wait till you connect the dots and we find out why it's always the same name. I bet you have something awesome up your sleeve

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  4. It would be fun to learn that some key Generals were seduced and controlled early on to bring huge numbers of males into this world to be fed upon. That would explain the entire venture quite well.

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    1. I have an idea for a longer novel that follows up from the corruption hinted in A Real-Life Goo Girl (lotz 'n' lotz of slime girls planned for that one)

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    2. I really liked that story. It's one of my favorite ones. The description of the rings etc. is a cool concept and the creature was interesting in her mystery in a way that the Succubus have been lacking. Well all except my favorite Succubus Cέrμləa. Great character on many levels, but I especially enjoy hearing when her Wonder-woman with blue hair persona comes to the forefront.

      On a different note: have you ever thought of playing with the idea of a Succubus that uses the online erotic hypnosis HFO (hands-free-orgasm) lure and hypnotist persona as a way of getting to her prey? If not there is certainly some fun to be had there. I sure many men thought this was a safe form of recreation, but maybe it really isn't...

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  5. It would be fun to learn that some key Generals were seduced and controlled early on to bring huge numbers of males into this world to be fed upon. That would explain the entire venture quite well.

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  6. Bate is a clone! I figured it out. Scientists have cloned someone to BAIT the succubi so they can catalog them! Muwahaha im a genius

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    1. Na, it's too simple, in these series humana are rarely that smart...they're probably entering H-space from different (human) universes. Can't wait for a Bate to find Phil

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    2. Bates can't be a clone. Several earlier stories showed a different name at the end, as if “Bates“ was inside the head of each victim. It makes me think Bates is either someone who is able (by mechanical or supernatural) to go through a deceased person's last moments, or a computer connected to computer chips inside all of the soldiers. The only reason I doubt the mechanical or chip theory is because of how H-space affects mechanical objects.

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    3. I was thinking it was one of the creatures helping the humans with a hidden agenda

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  7. Doc sounds stressed out. Maybe he needs to get laid.

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  8. Doc needs some anti erection medication or to fake his death.

    Both would be good.

    When hydra ends this series, doc is last on the chopping block.

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  9. Hey Hydra what is the military that bate is in. I couldn't right write more of my machina story cause on of them kinda goes in depth.

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    1. US military, or rather a fictionalised version. (I don't have the firsthand experience to bring proper authenticity to that aspect of the stories, so I avoid going in too deep on realism - enough to hopefully be plausible and hope the inevitable howlers aren't too jarring)

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    2. Hydra, if you can find the American AP Styleguide, it will have a list of the different ranks, enlisted and officer, for each of the branches and their proper abbreviations. It's what I lived by when I was working in the newspaper industry.

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    3. Cheers mjm, that sounds like a good resource. (I was starting to think I was using PFC a little too often! :D )

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    4. Depending on the branch, you could have Cpl (corporals) and Sgt (sergeants). Marines also have LCpl (lance corporal) or the army's Spc (specialist).

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  10. *sigh

    TLDR: A reviewer being a little bitch over lack of variety


    M.E.Hydra, your work is very good. In fact, I can honestly say that you are one of the few writers I can rely on to consistently produce high quality content.

    It's just.... I feel like your work needs more variety. It almost seems like you exclusively write femdom/snuff stories where the men are a little bit pathetic.

    I know thats sort of the point with this particular series......but across your work as a whole I personally would appreciate it if sex scenes were a tad more romance and a tad less horror.

    It sometimes feels like I'm reading a restaurant review from the POV of the food

    don't get me wrong. Nothing INHERENTLY wrong with femdom. I liked MGQ, but that had a story and character focus, art+varying art styles, and FAR more variation on the kink-o-meter.



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    1. Dude Hydra writes Erotic horror. That His bread and butter,that what he good at.

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    2. Totally aware of that, and hes certainly very good at it.

      I was just suggesting he try branching out once in a while.

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    3. It's a common complaint. :D

      I do throw in the occasional Nicole or similar story to break things up, but H-space isn't really the place for it. Some of the H-space monster girls end up working for the humans (see short story "Vernon the Volunteer"), but their motivations are murky at best.

      It's not going to be all grimdark forever and ever, though. I have a strong novel idea featuring Nicole (and another 'friendly' succubus) I'm planning to start work on once Succubus Summoning 201 is edited and out the door.

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  11. Write monster girl transformation stories. With human women.

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    1. I'm not the best person to ask for this as it's not really my thing. I know KC does it a lot with Fallen Maidens and in the Monster Girl Encyclopedia. As for writers... I wish I could make recommendations, but it's not really something I look for so I don't have any names to throw your way (maybe someone else can help in the comments?).

      Also, just because I say it's not my thing, that isn't a guarantee it will never happen. Maybe a H-space story where a succubus converts one of the female staff, who then goes all snu-snu on Bate...

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    2. Speaking of which. There is a fallen maiden related game now called ''Another Story of Fallen Maidens'' Here is the DLsite link :
      http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ180894.html

      Have fun :)

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  12. I'm surprised in some cases that at least some of the H-space species don't capture prey and put them in a cage so they can feed at their leisure. It would be along the same lines of people keeping livestock so we can breed them and control the food output. I would enjoy reading about a captive in this scenario who was ill treated, barely fed, and anxious to get home but was also so addicted to the pleasure aspects of their captivity that they were torn on gaining their freedom. They also might be concerned that if they ran they might be sucked to death by one of the more hostile H-space creatures.

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    1. I have a few along these lines to come. The 'livestock' isn't managing to survive long, though. I'll have to try harder there... ;)

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  13. Many plz don't forget about my PM on MGU :P

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  14. You mentioned cunnilingus as a method of draining, but I only remember one story of yours where a succubus feeds on a woman (sweetheart removal agency maybe?). It'd be nice to see another woman "removed" :)

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