Thursday, October 22, 2015

Chad's Challenge

My 2nd story for Literotica's Halloween story contest is up.  You can read it here:

Chad's Challenge

No idea where this one came from.  It bubbled up from the little black cells at the back of my brain and I wrote it down.  I wanted to write a simple old-style manyeyedhydra short story with monster girls and dangerous snu snu to get the machinery moving again.  It took a little longer to write than I expected, probably because it's also about 1.5K words longer than I originally anticipated.

It's a little freaky, especially on the sex bit...

I hope you all enjoy it anyway.

I've got today to finish the 3rd entrant.  That might be a little too tight.  The subject matter is topical, so even if I don't make the deadline I'll still post it to Literotica as soon as the story is finished.


9 comments:

  1. Well. That was...disturbing. I'm filled with unusual amounts of morbid curiosity about the background details. From a pure horror perspective, this one's certainly more intense than usual. Excellent work as always!

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  2. That one was creepy, but satisfying, but not as arousing as what I'm used to. A good read though.

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  3. Mr.Hydra you should join the Shadbase.http://www.shadbase.com/

    An have you been taking notes a the Depravity Repository http://depravityrepository.org/forums/

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    1. Some interesting sites. Hadn't seen either. Shadbase seems a little confusing. I'm not sure if that's a cartoonist's official site or another HentaiFoundry type thing.

      I think my work might be a bit tame for the Depravity Repository. They look more into splattery guro. I veer there occasionally, but it's rarely the main focus.

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    2. Shadbase is run by a single artist name Shad who like to draw erotic(and Futanari) arts of establish Anime and cartoon characters. Also he use to do commission,check out his products http://sharkrobot.com/collections/shadbase.
      But enought about that,the reason why i ask if you been to Depravity. Is that your works seems to be getting darker;and I'm not talking about chad challenge or the last one but overall. I don't know how to to explain it.

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    3. The short stories have always been fairly dark (I love horror and sexy bad ends). Maybe it's because there's more detail? What would have been 3-4K shorts are coming in around 6K, so maybe there's more dwelling on exactly what the succubus is doing to her (un)fortunate victim's body. The earlier protagonists were often cardboard-cutout assholes. Nowadays I try to add a bit more nuance to the characters - possibly makes it seems darker because they're more relatable. I don't know to be honest. Any theories from anyone else? :)

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    4. Oh I know your stories are dark even bleak. That why love your works:) But I get this sense that when you write your stories you hold back. Like you wanted to add more,but you didn't. If I have to use an analogy. Your stories are like house in you been painting it Midnight blue,and now your starting to add Ink black to the paint. I don't know I could be reading to much into it. I say this your skills as a writer has improve when I read your works over the years. I'm just surprise you haven't burn yourself out; like the other writers in literotica.

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    5. Ah I got it! Mr.Hydra do you remember your two stories. The sweetheart removal agency and Safe sex. In the sweetheart agency the main character was given choice to leave with his wife or get rid of her. I wasn't surprise about his choice. But what I was surprise,was that they kill his son. In most of your stories when the succubus kills it usually with sex ,and with the main characters. Not only they kill his son without sex,but in cold blood;possibly viciously since it implied they tore him apart with their teeth and claws. Now with Safesex the main character death didn't surprise. What surprise me was the succubus out right lied to him when she suck him dry. In your previous stories succubi didn't lie. They bend the truth,they tell half of it or didn't say anything;about the danger having sex with them. But in safe sex not only she lied about her nature,but she lied about not hurting/killing him.
      That what I mean that your stories seems to be getting darker.

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  4. Gave me a boner, but then stuff like this is what drew me to the fetish to begin with

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