As I said in the last post, the new short story, "The Succubus in Mr Herbert's Summer House" has been entered into Literotica's Halloween contest. The contest has begun and the story is now live. You can read it here:
Two local toughs in a seaside town are given a job by a grizzled old mobster. They must 'babysit' Mr Herbert's summer house for the night, and the mysterious woman tied-up on a bed inside...
(I had to truncate the original title as Literotica story titles have a character limit.)
Quick note on Literotica contests. Because of the way the scoring works, voting lower than a 5 for anything is actually worse than not voting at all. Also, don't do anything silly like downvote other stories to help mine. While there is a prize, the contests are a bit of fun and not to be taken seriously. I doubt this one will be a contender anyway because of the nature of the story. ;)
Also, yes, I'm aware of the formatting problem with the sentences in italics. There shouldn't be two extra lines of white space after the sentences. I'm guessing it's because the closing italics tag was put on the next line and Literotica formatted it oddly. So, sorry about that.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy it.
I don't think this particular story is finished just yet...