This is continuing my ongoing project to update the old H-space Bestiary shorts into proper short stories. This time I took the "Bubble-Tail Succubus" story and filled in how Bate ended up in the bedroom of the succubus.
The new and improved story can be found on Patreon and SubscribeStar.
These are temporary exclusives. My plan is to start putting out ebook collections once I've updated enough of the old stories. If you wish to support me in the meantime, you can get them early on Patreon and SubscribeStar (as well as access to the latest House of Hellish Harlots updates a couple of months before the public release).
As with a lot of the H-space stories, this is firmly weird pulp sex horror. The ending is a little nasty (as is the case with a lot of the H-space stories).
Do you think you'll ever go back to your Boob Snake short into something more? Like one of your ebooks?
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I'm hoping to update most of the Bestiary shorts at some point. Boob Snake is a nice monster girl design, so definitely want to expand that story.
DeleteWhat about having it seduce and fuck another character?
DeleteOr hell, imagine someone getting caught up in a threesome between *two* boob snakes~
It's a monster girl I'd like to work into other projects, whether other stories, or game stories.
DeleteThe ending was shocking and quite bloody, lol. It sucks that succubi didn't become a iconic horror movie monsters, but knowing Hollywood, they would just turn the succubi into a another slasher monster that will just seduce and then the head ripping bit. Look no forward than Jennifer's Body.
ReplyDeleteThere is an old school movie called Succubus Hell Bent.
1. Have you seen Succubus Hell Bent Hydra? The succubus (named Lilith) feels very Nyte-like when you think about it. Both have pale skin, wear a lot of black, aren't afraid to rip a man to pieces, and gives out mind blowing sex. Difference is that Lilith isn't a sadomasochist.
2. What will Verde and her sisters, the Madam, and the harlots reactions would be of a deadite from Evil Dead? What will think of a demonic spirit that takes over a human and turns the human into a cackling violent zombie like being?
Conventional sexy vamps took that role. Easier fx than a full demon transformation. Also, while showing lashings of gore is acceptable, explicit sex often isn't.
DeleteI would have much preferred Jennifer's Body to have been about the succubus using sex to manipulate all the student's into killing each other. I think it would have been a much harder movie to write though.
I did have a phase of trying to track down every succubus-related movie at some point. I think the best I managed for that was a bad foreign language rip. It was hard to find because the film wasn't very good, sadly.
2) Not sure how that would matchup. I don't really have analogous demons to the deadites and rarely use the possession angle.
Speaking of Evil Dead, Evil Dead Rise was fucking good and it did not hold back on the gore and cruelty. Little kids were NOT spared I'll tell ya what. One got choked to death another got thrown so hard against the wall he turned into a blood puddle. It was awesome.
ReplyDeleteWould Ashley Williams be putty for the succubi? He is a bit of a pervert.
I've heard some good things about Evil Dead Rise. Might check it out when it shows up on streaming. Kids in horror is a tricky balancing act. I hate the films where it's very obvious the family unit is completely invulnerable. I think you have to kill a kid early to show the film means business. But on the other hand, horror still has to be entertainment, so offing the cute kid/family dog is walking a fine line.
DeleteAsh would need a *lot* of plot armour to survive the succubi of my universes. I don't think they'd have to try too hard to put him in peril. :D
I decided to check out this Succubus Hell Bent movie and well...its not that good. Movie trailer was very amateurism and low quality and Lilith the succubus choosing to kill Adam's ex girlfriend and snaps his friend's neck just because Adam was...sleeping with other women?
ReplyDeleteUgh. A succubus going on a murder rampage just because she's jealous the man she slept with continues to sleep with women. It ain't a good motive, it sucks. Its like Nicole hunting down and killing men she fucked after discovering they had sex with women.
I can't stand succubi characters that wants dick from only one man. They are supposed to have very high sex drives and superhuman stamina.
Now onto my question. What if Nyte and her "sisters" found a man that has a lot of stamina and can drain him without him dying. Would they keep him as a semen dispenser?
There's a reason it was very hard to find torrents of it. Not a good movie, if I remember right.
DeleteI can't really criticise them on the jealousy angle. That pretty much underpins the biblical Lilith story. If you're using those roots, it's natural for the story to play out like that.
I prefer to emulate the cosmic horror approach to horror - everything is a lot weirder than we thought, the entities are coming from elsewhere, and do not think in ways we recognise.
They probably already have a few men like that stashed away somewhere. Not that they'd tell Phil! Unfortunately, even very high stamina only lasts for so long...
"They probably already have a few men like that stashed away somewhere. Not that they'd tell Phil! Unfortunately, even very high stamina only lasts for so long..."
DeleteConsidering how Verde got a bit jealous in 201 when Phil was watching that other student get a blowjob from their succubus, I like to imagine there might be a bit of double standards. :D
Like they only let him fuck certain ladies (or them). Like Verde, Rosa, Nyte, etc get a little more testy if he tries picking outside their circle or them.
I think a little jealousy for sure. It adds a bit of comedy.
DeleteFor the most part, Verde and friends quite like throwing Phil into the arms of other lust demons. That's generally in their control though. They don't like it as much if another lust daemon tries to grab him. I think that might be more them being protective rather than jealous.
Well Warren, there are numerous moments where succubi can be quite competitive when it comes to pleasuring humans and take pride in their "bed force" skills. Verde (the most 'nice' daemon) in the SS 101 gang was so offended by Phil trying to escape and didn't care about the sex she gave him actually slapped him.
ReplyDeleteAnd the moment with Rosa during "Night at Mchooligans" where Phil was distracted by all the carnage and told Rosa he couldn't enjoy the sex. This offends Rosa and she says that it wasn't wise to insult a succubus's sex skills and he gets blasted by her sex magic for this troubles.
I don't see it as Verde being jealous and only wanting Phil to herself, she sees that as competition and Phil being turned on by the other succubus offends her. As if that other succubus was better than her.
You see a lot this in the House as well. Panta wanting to be first because she's insecure and doesn't want to be outdone by other succubi, or Elegant Lady looking down on the vampire girl harlot with the blood drinking boobs because her sex skills are poor and isn't classified as a lust daemon.
There's probably a mix and it's dependent on the succubus. Some would be extremely jealous. Others wouldn't care as long as it didn't deny them access.
DeleteI try to keep that open and vary it from succubus to succubus.
I like the idea that a succubus will like a man "too much" and will kidnap him, bring him home, and will milk him until he dies from old age, like what the succubus harlot does to you if you become her boob slave.
ReplyDeleteI can definitely see Verde keeping a man stashed away somewhere to drain him if she goes for too long without seeing a human, or is feeling a bit peckish and wants to eat really soon.
Rosa is greedy and tends to don't care about the future. She won't save for later, she'll eat now.
Nurse Honey will just absorb the hapless human into her flesh. She's more after the man's body and soul and not just the semen.
Nyte will probably keep an "extra" around, but it won't be fun times for him because of the agony she likes to inflict.
Not sure about Cerluea. She's a random odd duck...
Sadly, anyone grabbed will likely find old age coming up on them a lot faster than normal. If a man is grabbed for longer term milking purposes, he's still going to get milked harder than his body can handle in the long term. There might be some succubi that are really gentle and keep someone around for a long time.
DeleteVerde probably has some trapped in her garden.
I suspect Rosa is a "milk them now and grab someone else later" sort of succubus.
For Nurse Honey, we already know what she does.
Nyte would be pure nightmare fuel. I do have a chapter idea that also links up with one of her short stories. I'm not sure I'd be able to put it up on Literotica though. If Nyte captures you, you're going to experience a wide range of sensations...
I don't know with Cerulea either. At a guess she'd probably lock them up in some kind of lotus eater machine type fantasy. That sort of story is really overdone though. I suspect I'll keep that open until I think of something interesting.
Regarding Nyte, I recall her treatment of Phil in 109 was considered unusually nice of her (almost sweet in her own way)?
DeleteI did like the kiss at the end. It makes me hope we can have another story where she's sitting in Phil's lap, with him completely sheathed in her, as she makes out with him while her wings wrap and hold him tightly (or wrap around something behind him) to keep the two of them in their own little personal darkness~.
It would be cool Hydra if you made a succubus harlot dress more casual. I know they are all about wearing skimpy dresses, ropes, lingerie, bikinis, and dominatrix outfits and all, but it would be interesting if a succubus wore a simple shirt and jeans.
ReplyDeleteThe succubus may dress casual and not naughty, but the twist is that she has naughty words or images on her shirt, things like "Cu m Dumpster" or "I SUCC for Souls" on her shirt. Or the image of a man's arm being entangled by a succubus tail.
Boobella is probably the closest there. In both her story and HoHH appearance she tends to look like a regular hot college 'mean girl'.
DeleteShe's also really popular despite my best efforts to make her really bitchy and unlikeable. :D
Maybe a future harlot slot could be occupied by a casual T-shirt 'n' jeans succubus.
The succubi harlots wearing funny perverted shirts would be hilarious. You'll get things like:
ReplyDelete"Satan's Little Whore"
"Live to SUCC and SUCC to Live"
"Can't Spell Succubus without SUCC"
"I put the SUCC in Succubus"
"Your Dick Here" *a red arrow points downward to the crotch of the succubus*
"Fuck Gal"
And much more lol
It's got possibilities.
DeleteThere might be a short story idea where someone berates a succubus for wearing a naughty T-shirt and finds out she really is Satan's Little Whore.
I hope we get a harlot that talks about the Barman, taunting and insulting the PC by saying how trusting the Barman isn't going to save him. Hell a scene of a harlot insulting the Barman would be cool.
ReplyDeleteI want to start working the interactions in once I have enough harlots implemented. That could be a post-room event. It would also serve as an intro to Sammy's bully. (I really need to give her a scenario).
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