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Astrapia wiggled her ass again. Her sex winked wider, giving Phil a tantalizing glimpse of her moist pink interior.
And now it was time to collect his deserved reward. All he had to do was step up, place his palms flat on the smooth curves of her bum and thrust.
Yeah right. Like he was that stupid. He knew how succubi operated.
Phil turned and went to Verdé.
"Are you okay?" he asked.
She nodded. Phil noticed there were faint little crow's feet at the corner of her eyes, but their presence was fleeting and they were gone by the time he helped her to her feet.
"Thank you," she whispered and placed a soft kiss on his cheek that made him feel like the whole of his body had been wrapped up in a pleasant warm glow.
She put her robes back on. Phil looked anxiously at the bound succubi. He didn't know how long the vines would hold them.
"We should leave," Phil said.
"You know, there is a perverse irony to this situation I would find highly arousing if I wasn't so exhausted," Verdé said.
"You're missing out," Astrapia called out to Phil. "You have no idea of the pleasures my pussy can bring you."
"We really should leave," Phil said.
Verdé put her arm around Phil and rested her head on his shoulder as they walked—too slowly for Phil's liking—out of the room. He kept glancing behind him as they walked back to his room. It was one of the few occasions where he was glad to find Rosa waiting in his bedroom.
She was not alone. Standing next to the red-headed succubus was a stern-looking woman wearing full plate armour. Rosa was tall by human standards and the woman standing next to her was easily a full head taller. Or rather, daemon. Her lips were cobalt-blue in colour and the teeth behind them were pointed, as were her ears. Her skin, where it was visible, had a blue rather than pink tinge. Her armour was white with gold trim and so elaborate it looked more like a piece of art then a suit of protective gear. It had been polished so brightly it hurt the eyes to stare at for too long.
Who was she? She resembled some kind of fantasy paladin or valkyrie.
Yes, who is she? To be concluded...
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Glad Phil has common sense. Now this is getting more interesting with this new daemon appearance, is she a special type of succubus or lust daemon or wrath or from another one of the circles. What is she here for, can't wait to see how this ends.
ReplyDeleteAlready saw him dying.... Great story so far! Phil's actually growing up... A little bit X-)
ReplyDeleteNow keep going, can't wait for the rest! X-)
Huh, I was surprised to see Rosa described as tall. I always imagined her and Verde to be petite.
ReplyDeleteFrom my own gatherings about Rosa, She seems like she would be a kind of tomboyish type. She has a athletic body and would be taller then most other girls. Verde would be more lithe and elegant seeing as that fits with her personality.
DeleteI got that too from the original 101 story when they seemed to be described more like girls from an anime. Little details of their like the small wings behind their ears, which were never brought up again, seemed to have faded as the story has grown from a one shot to a more fleshed out novel.
DeleteThe Morrigan-esque head wings are still there (even if I forget about them as well)
DeleteI'll have to recheck the earlier descriptions to make sure I'm being consistent. In my head I have it as
Rosa > Nurse Honey > Nyte > Verde
But not massively so - something like a range from 5'5" or 5'6" -> 5'9" or 5'10" at most. (So while Rosa is the tallest, she's not six foot).
Of course, it's possible my recollections have slipped over time. When I put 201 together I'll also be going through 101 to make sure everything is internally consistent! :)
Wait wait so Rosa is the tallest of the girls. I always had the impression nyte was especially during 209 when she was first described. Then again it could be that Phil is just short because only person I believe when his size was compared to was verde and rosa and I thought he was described taller than both. Dammit now i got to go back and read things.
DeleteAlso where does that put Cerulea in her true form or does she shift change too much to even bother to even keep up with.
DeleteYou're not the only one who has to go back. Like I said, it's possible I've let things slip in my mind from what I first wrote. :D
DeleteCerulea has too many forms. The super-heroine-proportioned one she fucked Phil with in the first book would be taller than all the others.
I think! Hmm, I definitely should reread my own Succubus Summoning 101 before putting 201 together! :D
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DeleteI don't know if you actually ever described their relative heights. I just always thought of Verde/Rosa as the petite, girlish, 'junior' succubi - this seemed to go with them being less mature, apparently lower on some kind of social hierarchy, less mean and scary, etc. Meanwhile, I imagined Nyte/Honey/The Scrote's succubi as tall and statuesque, and physically domineering (at least relative to Phil.)
DeleteBut of course, they're your characters! That's just the impression I had in my mind.
Perhaps Phil is getting a bodyguard :)
ReplyDeleteHey do you take ideas? I have a realy good one. Since you always write about H space monster girls and the various ways they prey on men, have you ever considered what do they do to women? My idea is that they turn women into their own kind. I have fantasies of monster girls turning women into monsters. But I don't have the writing skills to put it to words so that others could read it. Could you Hydra write some stories like that, that involves your H space world and the various monster girls? I would be thrilled to read such stories.
ReplyDeleteThat's the way it works in Monster Girl Encyclopedia at any rate.
DeleteI've done that twice in my stories, would be nice to see how Hydra would write out such a scene
DeleteI have zero confidence in my ability to write erotic scenes from a female perspective, which unfortunately limits my ability to write those stories without them sucking (believe me, I would love to be able to fill those gaps in my various universes!)
DeleteOh one little comment. Rozalin_0123 had requested info on where You get your names for the hellish things. She may be able to help with the woman POV on the h-space thing. Read one of her stories was pretty good. Though I enjoy this current one more;)
DeleteHydra, you wrote lots of stories already. You created this monster world of yours. You have experience. Surely you would not lose confidence in yourself if you face a new challenge?
DeleteGreat transition. Very cleverly placed cliffhanger... But that goes without saying. I am also happy to see the little detail on Verde. That was the perfect amount of info. Great story. Keep it coming ;)
ReplyDeleteThe armored woman spoke up:
ReplyDelete"Succubus Police Squad. You've been charged with bringing forbidden plants into this realm and leaving three succubi unsatisfied. The fine is 50 liters of semen. If you can't pay immediately, you'll stay in our bondage prison until you're able to."
Now that would be an interesting story! :)
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ReplyDeleteIt's Cerulea! She's in one of her personalities' forms!
ReplyDeleteYet another fun twist! Also, Hydra, if at all, how does speculation into your future plot twists impact your process?
ReplyDeleteVery little to none. I normally have a rough idea of what the set pieces are long before I write them. If people guess correctly, they guess correctly. My usual strategy is to say nothing either way ;)
DeleteA thanks to civildeviation for asking that question. Now that I know or at least pretty sure my comments won't affect the outcomes of the story I feel a bit more free to express my opinions and speculations... HYDRA feel free to let me know if i go too far either here or in email of you still have it.
DeleteI have always wondered why the succubus Phil summoned look so different from all the other succubi you describe in your stories. I have always felt that since you described them in great detail in 101 that it had to mean something than just ordinary succubi. So as the story unvieled itself, I see that Verde seems to have some plant speciality, Rosa seems to have a deep hidden power either in fire or otherwise. Nyte seems to a power of torture or death still unsure of her but definitely stronger physically that a succubus should be. Nurse honey... She is a puzzle we have seen her I her true form and her horns form a crown of sorts I am sure this plays into the story somewhere such as she is or was an ancient queen of succubi besides the fact that she absorbs souls differently than anyone else. Then there is cerulea... She seems to be the biggest mystery of all... Find it very interesting that she is the oldest and Has the appearance of a young girl. She seems to be part of everything but not wholely anything. Her blue hair gives me the idea of ice powwe but that only seems to be the surface. The thing that most interests me is why she is not allowed to go into the human world just her and what is the time or minding of the constalations she is waiting for... Something big is going to happen and when it does I feel we will see her in a while new light.
I had to write the rest of this down so I remembered...
DeleteWhen Nyte was given the severed head by the incubus was that Emily brennen? Also was she killed when the incubus impaled her with his large dick? I see that she was burst from within and the Linda makes sense to me. And nyte seemed like she was going to take revenge after she found out who nearly killed phil.
Also, I assume this will be answered in time but why would Rosa or any other succubus want to kill phil after he was remade by the quiso( sorry spelling)?
Think that's all my questions for now.. Really need to write them down when they come to me. Thanks
This is just my interpretation but I think Nyte is more omnipotent than just torture and death. She seems to be well respected by every demon from each plane we've met. So who knows what she was really doing before she joined up with the other 4.
DeleteCerulea my guess was she became so powerful she lost control eventually and was split into all these different forms, with the true form being the one in the widow's veil in the scene when she break'so phil's mind.
Nurse Honey is the big mystery for me because we rarely see her interact with the others besides seeming like she might have a soft spot for Verde
Honestly I think what makes Succubus Summoning so great is that each of the Succubi aren't just cut and paste fire, grass, water, light ,duty dark. They all seem to have a wide and varied set of skills, personality, and a deep history.
DeleteWhich chapter was the "true form" of Cerulea?
DeleteThe very end of 109
DeleteThat's what I love most about the succubi. All of them are special in their own way. ��
ReplyDeleteI so want to be able to select the bad end now like monster girl quest XD
ReplyDeleteClaim the spoils as the strong warlock....