Are in.
I didn't place, but I think I came close. I was on the site just as the results were announced (which tends to be important if you want to check scores as winners usually have their entrants bombed by jealous eedjits right after the announcement). The 3 winners were all in the 4.83-4.84 range and I think my story finished up around 4.82-4.83. So, close.
Closer than I was expecting to be honest. Usually I have to throw in a nice ending and a satisfying twist like this or this to place. "Night of the Nude Succubus Orgy" has 3 idiots who end up being very very lucky. But it's good fun and I know the "nice-ending" fans have been a little under-served of late with all the grimdark H-space stuff.
The main purpose was to get back on Literotica, and that was achieved. I'm hoping this will continue. I have a story I didn't quite get finished for last Halloween and hopefully by next Valentine's Day I will have retrieved "The Heart Squad" from its current production hell.
And also, you'll notice on the right...
roughly about here if I got my placement right--------------------->
(Which I... uh... didn't)
...I have a link button to my Patreon.
Yes, I finally managed to set one up if you missed my announcement yesterday.
My Patreon page is here.
I'm going to be using this to fund things like writing the Literotica stories, the H-space monster girl bestiary shorts and the CYOA scenarios.
A big thank you to the people who are already backing me.
Today I've mostly been writing bouncy paizuri scenes with a lovely pink slime girl. That CYOA scenario is back on the go, even if it has spiraled a little out of control. More updates to come as soon as I'm nearer completion.
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Wednesday, July 18, 2018
Thursday, July 12, 2018
New Story - "Night of the Nude Succubus Orgy"
Yay. I made it.
As can be seen from the list of entrants to Lierotica's Nude Day Erotic Story Competition, I did just manage to get my story in before the deadline (by about 45 minutes according to my reckoning - leaving it fine just adds to the drama).
Here is the direct link:
Night of the Nude Succubus Orgy
A bit about it. I wanted to start with a traditional horror/ghost story opening going over the history of a spooky old mansion... and then it turned into a big old porn fest, probably one of the porniest stories I've ever written. Oh well, I'll have to write that traditional spooky horror/occult tale some other time.
The opening is a bit long, cynically so. There is a weird quirk to Literotica contests where it's better to have a reader give up half way through than have them read to the end and give the story an "ok" 4 out of 5. Because of how the scoring works, it's better for a writer if they're given no score at all rather than a 4 (or lower). Shorter stories have traditionally suffered for this in their competitions. So stick with it, even if you don't care for the wobbly occult stuff, it gets a lot hotter and sexy later.
Another note on Literotica contests. Please don't vote more than once or bomb other writers entrants. One, it's not very sporting and two, Literotica has algorithms to spot that type of behaviour and the votes just end up getting scrubbed.
While I wouldn't recommend starting an erotic tale this slow, it was fun to play around with all the Crowley stuff. Aleister Crowley is a real-life historical occult figure and tends to get name-checked a lot in this type of story to give them a pseudo-grounding in reality. The indie adult game "Lust for Darkness" I talked about a couple of weeks ago clearly took some inspiration from Crowley's exploits. A bust of his likeness can be found in the mansion and one of the books you can find mentions Crowley's Thelema religion.
Rather humorously, I botched my research and had to make some last minute edit changes as the original date I had for when the ritual took place was during a time when Crowley had already moved back to England. The body double stuff is pure fiction on my part.
The succubi also developed stronger characters than I was expecting. I'm tempted to use them again. Maybe there's a full novel here once I include the other succubus scenes. Obviously it will depend on how the story is received. I enjoyed writing it, but that might not necessarily translate to people enjoying reading it!
If you did really like one (or more) of the succubi in the story, let me know in the comments below and I'll see if I can give them some more action in a future story.
As can be seen from the list of entrants to Lierotica's Nude Day Erotic Story Competition, I did just manage to get my story in before the deadline (by about 45 minutes according to my reckoning - leaving it fine just adds to the drama).
Here is the direct link:
Night of the Nude Succubus Orgy
A bit about it. I wanted to start with a traditional horror/ghost story opening going over the history of a spooky old mansion... and then it turned into a big old porn fest, probably one of the porniest stories I've ever written. Oh well, I'll have to write that traditional spooky horror/occult tale some other time.
The opening is a bit long, cynically so. There is a weird quirk to Literotica contests where it's better to have a reader give up half way through than have them read to the end and give the story an "ok" 4 out of 5. Because of how the scoring works, it's better for a writer if they're given no score at all rather than a 4 (or lower). Shorter stories have traditionally suffered for this in their competitions. So stick with it, even if you don't care for the wobbly occult stuff, it gets a lot hotter and sexy later.
Another note on Literotica contests. Please don't vote more than once or bomb other writers entrants. One, it's not very sporting and two, Literotica has algorithms to spot that type of behaviour and the votes just end up getting scrubbed.
While I wouldn't recommend starting an erotic tale this slow, it was fun to play around with all the Crowley stuff. Aleister Crowley is a real-life historical occult figure and tends to get name-checked a lot in this type of story to give them a pseudo-grounding in reality. The indie adult game "Lust for Darkness" I talked about a couple of weeks ago clearly took some inspiration from Crowley's exploits. A bust of his likeness can be found in the mansion and one of the books you can find mentions Crowley's Thelema religion.
Rather humorously, I botched my research and had to make some last minute edit changes as the original date I had for when the ritual took place was during a time when Crowley had already moved back to England. The body double stuff is pure fiction on my part.
The succubi also developed stronger characters than I was expecting. I'm tempted to use them again. Maybe there's a full novel here once I include the other succubus scenes. Obviously it will depend on how the story is received. I enjoyed writing it, but that might not necessarily translate to people enjoying reading it!
If you did really like one (or more) of the succubi in the story, let me know in the comments below and I'll see if I can give them some more action in a future story.
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