Sunday, July 24, 2016

Why Succubus Summoning 213 isn't up on Literotica

UPDATE 2016/08/09: This appears to have been resolved.  See here.


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ETA:

Okay, so I suppose I shouldn't have left it with no other comment than a frowny face.

As far as I can tell, in my excitement at finally finishing a story arc I started five years ago, I accidentally fell foul of Literotica's strict rules against self-promotion in my closing note.  This paragraph is likely the sticking point:
"I'm aiming to collect all the 201 chapters together into an ebook/print book.  Look out for that when it hits Amazon.  (Feedback on the ending or anything is welcome – If I've screwed up here, there's still a chance to fix it before the final book version!)"
Literotica doesn't allow advertisements or links to other sites.  This is a reasonable measure to stop the more shameless self-promoting writers from bombarding and annoying readers with an endless stream of BUY MY BOOK! links rather than telling a story.  Also, because of the large number submissions they receive daily, I believe the first line of checking consists of crude text filters and/or rapid skim-reading.  Thinking I might have tripped that with the Amazon mention, I removed the sentence, added a note that there wasn't any advertisements or links to outside ebook stores/blogs and resubmitted.

And got bounced again.

At this point I went "Hmmmm."  The rejection reason was clarified as they don't like writers referring to any writing outside of Literotica, but this doesn't match up with the guidelines they give in their FAQs, which are more concerned with forbidding links to or mentions of other websites.  As it's a second rejection, I have to assume this isn't a case of an auto-filter tripping up and returning a false positive.

So, hmmmm.

Of more concern is this is the second time I've had a story/chapter rejected this year.  The reason none of the H-space monster girl bestiary shorts have appeared on Literotica is because the first one was rejected for snuff/violence concerns despite being far tamer than many of the other erotic horror stories I already have up on Literotica (like this one, for example).  Admittedly, I'd submitted the H-space Bestiary story through an alt account (that clearly announced itself as an alt of my main account) and stories from new accounts might be subject to tighter moderation.

So, I dunno...

I've seen other writers remove their work from Literotica after getting it published (self or otherwise) or even start serials with the intention of pay-walling the ending off in an Amazon ebook (I understand writers' desire to get paid, but this is a dick move).  I didn't want to do either of these things with the Succubus Summoning series, but to be honest, having the last chapter of the arc bounced for what seems like really trivial reasons turned something that should have been a source of some excitement for me into something that put me into a bit of a funk.  As a result I decided I wouldn't be making any further effort to tweak the chapter into a version that might be accepted.  I have reserved a provisional release date from my publisher, eXcessica.  The ebook version will be coming out soon.  Literotica can wait until after that.

After the ebook is out I'll probably go back and make another effort to see if I can get Succubus Summoning 213 accepted by Literotica, or remove the whole 201 arc, depending on how I feel.

The main purpose of this post is to have something to refer Literotica readers to when they ask why 213 hasn't gone up.  Or for when/if someone accuses me of dick moves when they see the ebook come out before the ending on Literotica.  (I'm not holding the ending hostage - it's here on my blog if you want to read it.)

Gah.  What an annoyance.  Oh well, the chapter has been submitted.  It's out of my hands as far as I'm concerned.

As for the collected Succubus Summoning 201 novel, I'm still waiting for cover artwork and other things.  As soon as I'm confident everything is ready I'll start publicising the official release date.

19 comments:

  1. Interesting... Literotica doesn't know what true story writing is. Might be for the best though making more people come here and buy the book instead of getting your hard work for free.

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  2. Honestly, if you were to write novel length sequels to the SS arc I'd literally throw my $$$ at you. I have been supporting you by buying a few of your ebooks for now though.

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  3. Need your own site! Time to look at making a Patreon and your own forums and site to build up your Erotic Horror fanbase.

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  4. What was the reason given?

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  5. This is one of the reasons I quit writing. I found out nearly all of the stories posted on Literotica go thru a volunteer editor. I had one rejected because the "editor" insisted my story go through their editor staff before they would let it post.

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    1. I'm still hoping that you start writing again, regardless of where it gets posted or sold!!

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    2. Don't you have your own website to post your stories on?

      As for you Yshomatsu, how are you doing regarding writing? Anything lewd and new regarding succubi coming from the depths of your mind and soul? :P

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    3. I emailed you earlier today, sorry your email got lost in my junk folder

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    4. Got your email. Thanks for it. Will respond later.

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    5. Yshomatsu and Warren, I hope to get back to writing too. It's a bit hard, now that I've started my new career of driving a tractor trailer. A lot of hours behind the wheel and not a lot for the computer. Even this is typed out on my Kindle.

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    6. Mjm202036, what is your email?

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  6. Agree with anon 2.

    Please tell us the juicy details.

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  7. No wonder I'm not seeing any new content. The editors are too busy silencing good stories.

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  8. Not much to talk about, as long as we don't know WHY it was rejected...

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  9. Okay so let's see the reason why. Hopefully it was a mistake on their part with the staff, if not then well I'll save my thoughts until everything is out on what happened.

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    1. Hiya, cheers for the feedback. The main problem with extending the fight is while I've been dropping a few hints that Phil isn't quite as incompetent as he thinks he is, he's not strong enough to beat Astrapia in a straight fight. As Carny points out in an earlier chapter - Warlocks summon daemons to fight for them as warlock vs daemon usually ends up with the warlock getting squished. Within those constraints I went for the ending I thought fitted, even though it's a little light on the sex and action. I'll keep thinking about it, so I wouldn't be surprised if things are slightly different when the novel comes out.

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    2. I agree with Casey that the scene did end too fast. Perhaps the final edit just needs the tease part extended a little while Phil is fighting through the lust before casting the spell.

      all in all it's great to see Phil stand up for himself finally

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  11. Ok I really need to start writing things down that I have questions about...

    First of all, Verde seems to be the most mentioned of the succubi. She seems to help Phil along more than the rest of them. Waiting for Phil to decide about living in 101 arc longer than normal. In 201 arc she brings continues to hope for him by giving Phil her energy until he gets a new body from the plant lady. Then She smothers him in kisses. She seems to really have feelings for Phil than the other succubi. The only other Deakin that show that kind of concern for Phil is carny.

    Annd oh by the way would like to hear a story about how carny became the way he is.

    I get the feeling that as the story continues Verde and Phil may fall in love. That makes things interesting....

    I know that HYDRA doesn't give things away as he said just looking for other input to see if i am off my rocker on this one.

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