Monday, February 10, 2014

New Story - "Busted Bankster"

Time to tally up votes.  I make 11 for "Busted Bankster", 3 for "A Special Tube of Lube", and 10 for "A Real Life Goo Girl".  So "Busted Bankster" it is.

Not to worry if you wanted one of the other two.  All three will be in the next collection.  I'm aiming to put that out next month if possible, so you shouldn't have to wait too long.

Time for a succubus cage fight.  This story was inspired by a scene in a computer game I liked.  Should be easy to guess which one.  I hope you all enjoy anyway.

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Busted Bankster

Last night Ken Shigenori had gone to bed secure with his lot in the world.  He’d gone to the right school, worked hard, been admitted to the right university, worked hard, took a job at the right city firm, worked hard, and while he wasn’t one of those ‘Masters of the Universe’ the papers liked to bang on about, after successfully closing out the DiMaggio deal he could expect to add a cool seven figures to his bank account once bonus season rolled around.

He’d thought about phoning up an escort, or two, to celebrate, but the even more lucrative Pontac deal had kept him in the office until past midnight.

“What do you think coke was invented for,” a colleague had joked with him a while back.

The joke was on the colleague.  His desk was abruptly cleared out a couple of months later, a consequence of taking the wrong position on a multi-million pound deal.

The city could be ruthless, but her rewards for the savvy and fast-thinking were considerable.  Ken was the cream of his generation.  He had a well-paid career with stellar prospects.  He had a swish apartment in a fashionable district of London.  He could retire to his bed, pull the covers over his head and sleep soundly with the knowledge his future was a fast motorway to riches and luxury.

Life was good.

* * * *

Today . . .

They’d snatched him off the streets of the capitol, in broad daylight, as he’d been returning to his office from an expensive lunch.  Al-Qaeda?  Anarchists?  Criminal gangsters?  Ken had no idea.  His captors had shoved a black hood over his head and bundled him into a car.  That hood had remained on his head as they’d drove and drove to a place where the hustle and bustle of city activity had faded away.

Hours later and still blindfolded, Ken was standing with his hands tied behind his back.  He didn’t know where they were, but from the cool damp air and the echoes his footfalls made off a hard stone floor he guessed it to be underground somewhere.

A roar erupted around him as his captors prodded him through into a larger opening.  It sounded like a raucous crowd at an illegal dog fight.  Ken’s anxiety grew.

He heard a rattling sound in front of him, like a chain-link gate clanking open.  Someone sawed through the rope around his wrists and then roughly shoved him forwards.  Ken lost his balance and went down to one knee.  At least with his hands free he could finally tear this bloody hood off.

Ken did that and looked around in time to see a wire-mesh cage door swing shut behind him.  He heard the metallic clank as bolts were slid across.  Behind the wire-mesh door dirty faces twisted into hate-filled masks glared at him.

He turned around and saw similar snarling faces pressed up against chain-link fence all around him.  They spat and screamed obscenities at him.  Ken was in a cage and surrounded by a mob baying for his blood.  They were underground.  Naked torches burned in brackets on the walls and in a chandelier far above his head.

What the hell was happening?  Where was he?  It looked like a gladiatorial arena from a post-apocalyptic road-warrior film.  The baying mob didn’t look quite that unkempt, but their shouts and jeers were just as barbaric.  Fists rattled against the fencing as Ken spun around.

“Fucking bankster scum!” a black man with dreads shouted at him.

Was that what this was about—more of that ninety-nine percent versus the one percent bollocks?  Yeah, Ken was in the one percent.  He was smart and had fucking worked his ass off to get there.  Any of those around him could do the same if they weren’t too busy moaning and looking for someone to blame for the tawdry ruins of their lives.  Fuck, if they wanted someone to blame they could start with the moron politicians they elected.  They were the people that kept setting the rules in favour of the elite.

He’d read plenty of the ‘hang ‘em from the lampposts’ comments on the mainstream news sites.  He’d dismissed them as the rabid frothing of people too lazy to move their fat asses out from behind their keyboards and do something constructive with their lives.  Had someone finally found enough of a spine to do something?

They wouldn’t get away with it.  The city was too important to the country.  She looked after her own.  The police would baton-charge this scum back into the slime where they belonged.

The noise, already a ferocious cacophony of hurled obscenities and rattling fences, ratcheted up a notch and changed in nature.  Cheers and whoops replaced the jeers as a tremor of excitement thrummed around the cage.  A door on the far side opened.  Ken’s opponent was entering the arena.

He was expecting a tattooed thug and instead they sent in a statuesque woman dressed in a flowing, glossy black cape and skimpy fetishwear.

Who the fuck was she?

She was tall enough to be imposing.  Ken reckoned she had a couple of inches on him and he was over six foot.  If that height had been backed up with the muscular physique of a wrestler he might have been concerned.  It wasn’t.  She was all soft curves, including a ridiculously over-inflated pair of tits.  She looked more like one of those wrestling divas that never actually wrestles and were only there as eye candy to keep the dads from getting bored.

And she definitely was eye candy.  Her costume, little more than a series of shiny black straps to hold her mammoth tits in place, looked more appropriate for the streets behind Kings Cross Station in the early hours of the morning.  Her glossy black leggings even had a zipper over the crotch.

She posed seductively and blew kisses to the enraptured crowd.  She courted their adoration like a gothic vampire queen with her pale skin, flowing raven hair and black cape.

“Eh-ry-zu!  Eh-ry-zu!  Eh-ry-zu!” the crowd chanted.

“Suck the leech dry!” someone yelled.

She must be the warm-up girl, someone to whip the crowd up like the Vegas showgirls that paraded a number around the ring before the start of each round of a boxing match.

Surely.

“Fuck him up, Eryzu!”

“Batter the bankster scum!”

They couldn’t be serious.  Just look at her figure.  Breast-obsessed perma-adolescent game developers could add voluptuous bodies like this into their fighting games to appeal to their equally breast-obsessed perma-adoloscent audience, but real fighters had actual physics to worry about.  Look at those breasts for starters.  They were ludicrous.  There must be about a football’s worth of silicone in each one.  It was not a body practical for fighting in.

Ken could think of plenty of other things that body was practical for.  And plenty of those things he’d pay good money to do with her.

But no, she turned, gave him a haughty stare and settled into what he assumed was some kind of fancy martial arts stance.

Ken shook his head.  If those morons thought they were going to derive some entertainment from watching  an over-inflated dominatrix beat the shit out of a pathetic, desk-bound banker they were about to get a shock.

He held up his fists and assumed a textbook boxer’s stance.

He wasn’t some flabby, overweight desk jockey.  He’d boxed for his university and still worked out regularly at the gym.

The girl, Eryzu, smiled at him.  She looked amused.

Ken suspected she wouldn’t be smiling so much after he’d worked her face over.  Or planted a solid body blow right in the centre of one of those big, fluffy white tits.  Normally he wouldn’t have relished messing up a girl’s face, especially one as fine-looking as hers, but he’d been abducted, blindfolded and thrown into an illegal fighting ring fuck knows where.  The gloves were off.

Still, it would be a shame to smash up a work of art like that.

“I’m not like the other nine-to-five slobs,” Ken warned.  “I boxed a lot at amateur level.  Stay in here and you’re going to get hurt.”

“I don’t think so,” the woman said, her dark eyes twinkling.

“I’m not going to go easy on you because you’re a woman,” Ken said.

“Do your best,” Eryzu said.  Her bee-stung lips turned up in smile of amused contempt.

“Eh-ry-zu!  Eh-ry-zu!  Eh-ry-zu!” the mob bayed.

She circled Ken.  Her movements were fluid . . . easy.  Despite her impractical figure, she moved gracefully.  Like a big cat.  She must know a martial art, Ken thought.  He wasn’t intimidated.  For all their flashy moves, most martial arts were about as effective as dancing when up against a trained boxer.

Let’s see how good you really are, Ken thought.  He fired out a piston jab at the white, flawless mask of her face.

Pretty good, as it happened.  Good enough to glide to the side with an amused little smirk on her lips and see his jab pass through empty air.

So she could dodge.  But for how long?

He’d fought slick operators before.  Puffed up on their own arrogance, they slid around the ring like oil.  All it took was one good clip and they fell down like a sack of spuds.

Ken kept his shape and kept firing out piston jabs.  Eryzu glided out of reach of his fist like a wraith, but was unable to get close enough to counterattack.

Ken was hoping she’d see he meant business—that he wasn’t a tubby overweight desk jockey—and call a halt to this ridiculous farce.  He didn’t relish the prospect of messing up her elegant face, or that bombshell of a body, but he would if she left him no other choice.

Eryzu kept dodging and Ken kept pressing.  She could duck and weave with the best, but she was running out of cage.  Ken was inexorably herding her to the corner.  Once trapped there, Ken intended to fully show her the folly of getting in a cage with one of the big boys.

Then she pulled off a move he would have sworn was a carefully choreographed wire stunt from a Kung Fu film if he hadn’t been right in the middle of it.  Even with the frontest of front row seats he still had trouble believing what he saw.  She vaulted his punch.  He put out a jab he felt certain would connect and the next moment she was on top of his outstretched arm and somersaulting over him like a capricious spring breeze.  So fast and graceful.  Ken felt like he was a golem made out of lead throwing punches in a tar pit by comparison.

He was still blinking in astonishment as Eryzu planted a kick in the small of his back and propelled him into the cage wall.  Faces twisted in hatred screamed at him.  One hawked a thick glob of phlegm into his face and Ken felt the cold slime slide down his cheek.

“Bloodsucking cunt!” a face with far too much hair screamed at him.

Fucking wasters, Ken thought.  No better than animals.

Rage rising to engulf him, Ken turned and charged the costumed fighter with his fists flailing.  Fuck playing nice.  He was going to pound that haughty face into hamburger.

Stupid.  Stupid.

He was a blind stupid bull and she a twirling matador.  She sidestepped his charge and swung him right back into the spit and insults of the mob pressed up against the cage wall.  She even had time to reach between his legs and give his balls a teasing squeeze.

Ken lashed behind him, but she was already gone, evaporated like mist.  He turned and saw her showboating in the centre of the cage.  His anger flared.

No.  Cool it.

He wasn’t some stupid bull to be led a merry dance around a ring until it expired from exhaustion.  He was one of the elite, the one percent.  This skank with big hooters was in no way his equal.  Ken brushed the red mist aside, put up his fists in a guard and advanced on her.  Eryzu’s full lips curled up in amusement and she goaded him on with a beckoning finger.

Fuck the Marquis de Queensbury shit, Ken thought.  If it was good enough for Holyfield, it was good enough for him.  He grabbed both her arms and attempted to plant a headbutt on her picture-perfect face.

Eryzu brought her arms together to block and they grappled in the centre of the ring.  Those soft curves that looked more suitable for the bedroom masked a wiry frame.  Ken couldn’t tug her off balance and had to expend a lot of energy to keep on his own feet.  Ridiculous cloak and slick dancing moves aside, Eryzu clearly wasn’t averse to mixing it up at close range as well.  Ken was a man and stronger though.  He started to lever her arms apart and away from her pretty face.

And tits.

As Eryzu’s arms opened up like curtains, the large bulges of her bosom came into view like moons rising above the horizon.  Ken’s gaze fell upon them, slid over the creamy curves and slipped down into the dusky cleft of her cleavage like water spiralling down a drain.  Eryzu knew the effect her body had on men.  She smirked and pushed her chest out.  Ken saw her jiggling boobs advance towards him until they filled his vision.

They were massive—enormous.  Larger even than the considerable round breasts of the grand-a-night escort he’d hired to celebrate the first time his bonus had cracked six figures.  Memories of that hedonistic night sent a throb of pleasure down to his crotch.

He could recall that night vividly.  A thousand pounds and worth every penny.  The girl had enormous tits.  Double-Ds and real.  They were soft and squeezable rather than the frozen-in-place bad boob jobs that looked okay until you got close enough to put your hands on them.  Ken had put his hands on them and played with them all night.  The hooker really knew how to use them.  She’d rubbed them all over his body and even let him blow his load between them to finish off in the morning.  Top night.

Ken’s dick stirred in his trousers at the memory.

The girl had been fantastic.  It was the closest he’d come to breaking his strict rules.  No repeat bookings.  That was his mantra.  Don’t give them a sniff of encouragement.  Don’t let them think they’re more than what they are.  Don’t get attached.  Don’t let them get a claw in you.  Don’t get romantic.  They might seem like the nicest, sexiest girl in the world, but in the end they all sucked a man’s bank account dry.

Ken blinked, lost in recollections of a sweaty night of pleasure.  Eryzu’s bust filled his vision.  If the escort’s breasts had been double-Ds, what did that make these?  They were enormous—creamy-white and fluffy.  A single black strap belted across her chest was all that held them in place.  The pale flesh quivered and strained against its restraint.  Eryzu pushed her chest out further and Ken’s head ducked lower and lower.

He was still staring into the endless chasm of her cleavage when Eryzu suddenly switched direction and went the way he was trying to tug her.  Caught off balance, Ken lost his footing.  Eryzu pulled away and Ken came toppling with her.  He fell forward and Eryzu’s bosom caught his face like a pair of air bags.

She twisted her wrists out of his slackened grip and wrapped her arms around his head.  Ken’s face was wedged right into the narrow space between her enormous boobs and trapped there.  Soft like pillows, her breasts pressed tightly around the sides of his head.

They could also smother him as effectively as a pillow pressed over his face, Ken realised numbly.

He knew this.  He could feel her warm skin pressed tightly up against his nose and mouth, blocking his air passages.  He could feel it in the pangs of lungs starved of fresh oxygen.  He knew he couldn’t breathe, that she was suffocating him.  He knew it, and yet he struggled to accept the reality—and gravity—of his predicament.

Smother him in her tits . . . don’t be ridiculous.

All he needed to do was twist his head free.

Ken thrashed and squirmed to no avail as Eryzu crossed her arms behind his head in an unbreakable bear hug that kept his face buried in the airless gap between her breasts.

Body blows.  That would work.  While she held his head there was nothing protecting her soft, vulnerable midriff.  Work her hard enough and she’d have to let his head go.

Ken worked her.  He unloaded body blow after body blow, slamming his fists into her unprotected stomach like he was working his punchbag back home.

That’s when he knew something was badly—seriously—wrong.  He was hitting flesh.  He felt his fists hit flesh.  It was soft flesh as well.  Womanly flesh.  There were no rock-hard abs to deflect his blows and make him feel like he was punching a wall.  Just soft flesh.  And he hit it again, and again, again, and again, and nothing happened.

Ken’s lungs were burning.  There was no air.  His face was filled with her overflowing breasts.

His punches grew weaker and weaker.  He felt like he was winding down.  Slowing down like a clockwork toy.  Even his thoughts felt like they were wading through thick mud.

He was suffocating.  In her cleavage.

This couldn’t be happening.  Not to him.  He was someone.  He was important.  He earned seven figures a year.  He was . . .

Ken’s hands dropped to his sides.  He blacked out.

* * * *

Ken came to with the crowd baying around him.  He was lying on the floor of the cage.  He saw the primitive chandelier hanging above him.  Over to the left he saw some kind of dim balcony.  Were those shapes people?

Eryzu was standing over him and blowing kisses to the mob.  She’d knocked him out.

With her tits.

Fuck.  Some Master of the Universe he was, fucking knocked out by a hooker with mutant tits.  He tried to move but his head felt like it had just been released from a vice.  His limbs didn’t feel like they were connected to the rest of his nervous system and he wanted to throw up.

“Drain him!” the crowd chanted.  “Drain him!  Drain him!”

“Suck the leech dry!”

Eryzu turned to look down at him, a smile on her voluptuous lips.  She opened her legs and bent her knees.  Ken saw she’d pulled his trousers down while he’d been unconscious.  His penis stood upright in an erection that mystified him until he recalled asphyxiation had that effect on most men.

Still smiling, Eryzu pulled down the zipper at her crotch.  The crowd roared in anticipation.  Ken’s brow furrowed as she exposed the pink lips of her sex to him.

The fuck?  She was going to fuck him?

Eryzu lowered her hips.  Ken felt the pressure of her sex against the swollen head of his erection.  Then the pressure eased and her heat was spilling down his shaft as he slid up inside her.

Without a condom, he realised numbly.

In other circumstances Ken would fuck a girl like this without a moment’s hesitation.  If she’d been an escort he’d have dialled her up and fucked her in a heartbeat, maybe even dropped a cool grand on those big round titties.  He’d have driven his cock up inside her tight snatch for as long as he could keep it hard and coming.

But never without a condom.

That was dirty.

He didn’t have any say in the matter.  She lowered her hips and the fleshy pole of his cock vanished up inside her.  She was tight.  Really . . .

Ken sucked in a breath as muscles clenched around her.  It felt like she’d vacuum-packed him in her vagina.

. . . tight.

Something wasn’t right.  This wasn’t sex.  It felt wrong.  Just like when he’d buried body blow after body blow into her soft midriff and she hadn’t even flinched.

“What are you?” he asked.

“Drain him!  Drain him!” the crowd bellowed.

Eryzu smiled.  It wasn’t seductive.  The eyes were wrong.  Flat, black and hungry.  A shark’s eyes.

Ken tried to push her off, but his strength had gone.  Feebly, he pawed at her breasts like an invalid.

She grabbed his wrists and forced his hands behind his back.  She wrapped her legs around him and used her calves to pin his arms in place.  It was like a weird cross of tantric yoga and judo.  Once she locked her ankles together Ken was held as securely as if she’d bound his wrists behind his back.

He knew she couldn’t be human when her pussy started to suck on him like a mouth sucking on a lollipop.

It felt like sex, but sex where all the motions were internal.  Eryzu gasped in pleasure.  She squeezed his body between her thighs.  All the friction was generated within her vagina as the walls wrapped around his member, squeezed and tugged.  Less a sex organ and more like a mouth, a warm wet mouth administering a blowjob beyond anything Ken had experienced from the best and most expensive escort agencies in the city.  Sucking.  Sucking.  Tight hoops of flesh contracting around the base of his penis and then tugging up the shaft.  Sucking and sucking while Eryzu panted in erotic abandon.

“What are you doing?” Ken asked.

Twin strands of pleasure and fear spiralled up through his body.  What she was doing down there, doing to his cock, felt intensely pleasurable.  But it also felt wrong.  Horribly, abhorrently wrong.  He tried to squirm out of her grip.  She squeezed him tighter with her legs and pressed her sex down on him.  The soft wet walls within her vagina continued to suck on his manhood, tugging him deeper inside.

“Normally I would drain you slowly and pleasantly over the course of a night,” Eryzu said.

Again that word drain.

“But the crowd are impatient tonight.”

Eryzu unhooked the strap holding her breasts in place and the large white globes, pale beneath the candlelight, fell free.  Her chest expanded and she sucked in deep breaths.  Her abdomen tensed and Ken felt ripples of force wash through his body.  Her warm sex contracted around his penis and tugged slower and deeper.  Moist flesh slid up his shaft like silk soaked in expensive oils as her vagina sucked and sucked.  Ken trembled as pleasure vibrated down his shaft and ricocheted up his spine.  He’d been blown by the best and most exclusive, and they might as well have been common street trash compared to what she was doing to him.

Ken screwed his eyes shut.  Ragged breaths hissed out between his teeth.  Oh fuck.  He couldn’t hold back.  The pleasure was welling up from his balls.  It overwhelmed the pain in his pinned arms.  It overwhelmed the feel of the hard stone floor beneath him.  It blotted out the crude yells of the crowd around them.  It came up against the fear of the creature—for creature she had to be—wrapped around it and squashed it down into a tight ball.

“Mmm yes, baby,” Eryzu crooned.  “Spurt your cum inside me.  Fill me.”

“Hah!” Ken spluttered.

The sucking tugs of her pussy were too much.  His cock throbbed and he erupted up into the moist clutch of her sex.

“Yesss!” Eryzu hissed.

Her chest rose up and down, as did her flat midriff.  It was like she was flexing muscles beneath, muscles that flexed in concert until it felt like the whole of her body was sucking on his dick.  Sucking on it like a straw.  Sucking . . . and gulping, gulping down his semen as his body tensed and trembled in the grip of an unnatural orgasm.

Gulping.  That’s what the little motions of her body looked like.  A girl gulping down a drink, but wrong . . . upside down.  Horribly wrong.

Ken groaned.  He felt violent tremors run through his cock and balls as muscles squeezed and pumped more semen into her gulping sex.

“Pour it all inside me,” Eryzu sighed.

“Stop it!” Ken said when he realised his body wouldn’t, couldn’t. 

“It’s what the crowd wants.”

The muscles of her abdomen clenched and unclenched.  The gulping maw of her sex pulled more semen out of Ken’s shuddering body . . . and something else.

“Fuck the crowd,” Ken wheezed.  “I’m worth twice as much as all of them combined.  I’ll pay you twice whatever they’re paying you.  Four times.  Just don’t . . .”  He hadn’t wanted to think it, but could deny it no more.  Pleasure wrapped his body in a comfortable sheet, but beneath it he felt like he was coming apart, hollowing out.  “. . . kill me.”

Eryzu smiled.  Her black lips pouted in an obscene mockery of a kiss.  “They’re not the ones paying me.”

She exhaled and squeezed her thighs tighter around Ken.  Her chest—those swollen great tits—rose up and down as her whole body gripped Ken and pumped the semen from him.  Her pussy squeezed and tugged and pumped the fluids from his body as the flow became a gush.  He was emptying into her.  Not just his balls, but the whole of his body.

His soul.

Eryzu hissed in triumph.  Great bat wings the colour of midnight unfurled from her back.  Her head went back in an erotic sigh and when it came back Ken saw she had horns and her eyes were endless black abysses.  He was locked into sex with a devil, and through sex she was draining his life—and soul—away.  The crowd roared.

No.  This couldn’t be happening.  Not to him.

His head fell to the side.  He was collapsing, crumbling from within.  He looked up and saw the shadowy balcony.  Silent figures clothed in sable darkness looked down on him.  Oh god, he knew who they were.  That was Jean Pierre Graff, Ken’s boss at Jefferson Varrigan.  Next to him was Gordon Douglas.  He sat on the board of PJ Korgan, another of the big London investment banks.  And behind him was the owner of Silverman Jacks.  What were they doing here?

“Why?” he croaked as stared up at Graff.

He didn’t understand.  He was a good worker.  Loyal.  Valued.  Invaluable.  He made millions for the company.

He was one of them!

“Men have always sought goats to sacrifice in times of strife,” Eryzu said.

She pressed plush lips against Ken’s and sucked.  He came apart in a fountain of ecstatic bliss.  Eryzu held him tight while his skin wrinkled and shrunk around his bones.  His body grew emaciated and shrivelled as the succubus sucked the life out of it.  She finally released him with a satisfied sigh and little more than skin and bones collapsed onto the floor.

The crowd roared.

“Fucking bloodsucker.  Got what he deserved.”

“Ha ha, the leech sucked dry.”

“She sucked that bankster scum up good and proper.”

Eryzu stood up and milked their roars of appreciation.  She blew them kisses and jiggled the full swell of her breasts.  The men on the balcony nodded their approval.  That would keep the mob happy . . . for now.  They melted back into the shadows.  Eryzu watched them go and smiled.  They thought they were her masters, but in time she knew she’d devour them all.

THE END

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If you liked that and want more, please feel free to check out my books.  This and the other two stories will be in the next collection.  I'll post more details on that nearer the time (I still have a couple of stories left to finish off and don't want to repeat the mad panic I had with A Succubus for Remembrance.)

Saturday, February 08, 2014

Enough moping, it's time to get back to writing

Okay, that’s enough moping around.  Time to bash the black dog’s head in with a shovel.  Who am I kidding, I doubt I could stop writing even if I had to.  I enjoy it too much and I’m not going to allow a spot of holier-than-thou bullying poison the satisfaction I get from writing these stories.  I’m probably worrying about nothing anyway.  One of the problems with writing horror is that the mind gets very good at spinning out a scenario and stringing together the worst combination of outcomes.  I doubt the person was credible and even if they were the most it would likely amount to is some awkward conversations with my workmates.

(Note: this is my situation.  For other writers of erotica the circumstances might be very different, which is why an attitude of “They should write under their own name so we know who they are” is the mark of an ignorant asshole.)

I’ve had a week to think things over and I’m going to make a few minor changes.  I let myself drift a little too close to the world of “serious” writing.  My personal opinion is those online communities are toxic.  They’re highly politicized and if – like me – you don’t fit rigidly within a political ideology you get a clubbing from whichever side you get too close to.  I don’t think they’re healthy for budding writers either as they’re stultifying environments detrimental to creativity.

(Some might be reading this and thinking:  Hey, that doesn’t sound like the warm and friendly community I know.

Well bully for you.  Your face fit, someone taught you the secret handshake, or you found an entry point manned by the many decent people I hope don’t feel as if I’m tarring them with the same brush.

Unfortunately I saw a lot of unpleasant sneering assholes, took one too many brickbats to the face and decided I was better off staying right the fuck out of it all.)

“Serious” writing appears to have forgotten the contract between writer and reader and become obsessed on the things that are only ever proxies to this contract between writer and reader.  If you write something and even if only ten people read it and enjoy it, congratulations, you have still increased the overall happiness of the world.  Do not let anyone else try to tell you otherwise.  Only the worst kind of person tries to dictate to everyone else what their fantasies should be.

And hrarghhullll.

That’s another sticky black hateball I had to get off my chest.  I hope I’m not going to make a habit of this, otherwise I’ll have to stick a note on the blog – “It has been 7 days since Many-Eyed Hydra’s last online meltdown.”

Plus I assume you’re all here for the sexy succubus action, not a bunch of whiny ranting from someone who should be old enough and wise enough to know better.

The tl;dr version – Fuck the snobs and holier-than-thou bullies, I’m not going to stop writing the stories I enjoy writing.

To show I am most emphatically not done with this writing lark and as a thank you I’ll post one of the stories I have saved for the next collection.  There’s even going to be a choice:

Busted Bankster: A city trader is drawn into a deadly cage fight with a succubus and is smothered by her large breasts.

A Special Tube of Lube: A work-at-home software developer is given a sensual ‘4 hands’ massage by two busty students that ends up with them demonstrating a very special tube of lube.

A Real Life Goo Girl: A researcher studying an unusual slime girl brought back from H-space is trapped in the lab with her when she escapes.

Pick the one that most takes your fancy and let me know in the comments.  I’ll post the one with the most votes tomorrow.

(don’t pick the one I haven’t finished editing yet . . . don’t pick the one I haven’t finished editing yet . . .)

Thank you all for your messages of support and I'm sorry for being stupid enough to allow myself to get distracted from what's important - supplying the world with sexy succubus smut.  Next week normal service should be resumed.  I’ll wrap up the walkthrough of Violated Hero 4 and after that I have some reviews of some other monster girl hentai games I’ve played recently.

And of course I'll keep scribbling away on new stories/chapters, it's what I enjoy doing.

Monday, February 03, 2014

So a writer at The Guardian threatened to dox me today...

Doxing, if you're unaware, is the process of posting personal information about someone, effectively revealing the real life person behind the online pseudonym.

This is a fairly nasty threat against anyone who writes explicitly about sex.  By and large we live in more enlightened times, but they're not that much more enlightened.  People are still highly judgmental about matters of sex.  Writers of erotica write under pseudonyms with good reason!  They don't want their enjoyable and harmless online hobby causing potential problems in their real lives.  There are school teachers and other similar professions that use writing on places like Literotica as an escape valve.  If the nature of their hobby became exposed it could cause them considerable difficulties in their careers.  For people with the misfortune of living in more repressive regimes, being unmasked could have far more serious repercussions.

I'm fortunate that I'm not in that situation, at least I think so.  Which is the problem.  Maybe my employers would be cool with what I write, maybe they wouldn't.  Maybe my friends would mostly remain my friends, or maybe they'd spend all day squinting at me sideways as if I was an alien.  That's the problem with these things, no one can really tell.  Which is why the majority of erotica writers choose to use pseudonyms.  It's safer that way.

I don't know if the threat was serious.  It was a heated discussion.  I and others were hurt and offended by the article and let the author know.  When the red mist rises cross words are typed.  The threat might not have been any more credible than the average twitter death threat.

But...

As much as I dislike bowing down to holier-than-thou thuggery, there are real life risks and consequences.  I have a family and a career.  The fear of a threat like that starts to eat away.  Was it serious?  Were they bluffing?  If they weren't and my real name leaked into the public domain what then?  Will I lose my job and then have difficulty finding future employment?  It's easy for the mind to prey on worse case scenarios.  This is a fun hobby I enjoy a great deal, but it is a hobby and I have to weigh it up against a career that puts food on the table and pays the bills.

I'm sorry to the people coming here in expectation of fun fantasy stuff.  I'm going to have to take a pause and think on this.  I love what I do, but I also love my real life job and I can't take a chance on jeopardising that.

I really loathe bullies, always have.

Sunday, February 02, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 4! part 17

Are we at the end?  I think we’re almost at the end of the Violated Hero 4 walkthrough.  I don’t think it’s going to get any lighter on the squicky sex stuff, so you might want to leave now if you’ve navigated here by mistake and are revolted by such stuff.

This is where I try and figure out what order to piece together the remaining content.  Looking at the the CG Mode and Replay libraries, we’re missing five scenes.



The last one is presumably the Good End.  I’m guessing the other four are some combination of Lilith/Sharia Bad Ends.

This is where I break from liveish blogging while I figure out which order to present things.

Okay, let’s go all the way to the “Good End” first.

Thankfully Lilith does not seem that much of an impenetrable brick wall.  Unless she has a further “one-wing angel” stage I reckon I was about one super potion away from defeating her.  I suspect I might have received a little fortune from the random number gods to get her HP that low, so I think I’ll pick up a couple of extra super potions on top just to be on the safe side.  I’m also missing some of the encounters from earlier levels, so this seems like a good excuse to fill them in as well.

A spot of grinding and then it’s back to take on demon god Lilith.  This time around the random number gods aren’t so kind, but I wasn’t expecting them to be so I made sure I had a few extra potions just in case.

Now, was that the final-final battle?  Are we going to get our happy-happy joy-joy harem ending?

Come back next . . .

Just kidding!

Lilith falls over.  Luka-clone has done it.  He has saved the human world.

Well actually not, as Lilith points out.  She correctly observes that Luka-clone didn’t defeat anyone; it was the monster girls in his party.  It was monster girl on monster girl and none of the bosses were actually killed either, so their numbers have not decreased.  Also, all those sexy monster girls in his party were only contracted until he’d defeated the demon god . . .

Uh oh . . .

And now that the demon god (in this case Lilith) has been defeated the contracts are up.  The monster girls are free to do as they wish.  Is this a good time to point out Luka-clone is at the same location as all of them.

Big uh oh . . .

I sense a pile-on in Luka-clone’s future.

Oh, Lilith decides to abandon her world of “pleasure of chaos”, so it’s not all bad.

The way the devil kings talk about “training” Luka-clone, bad.

Alas poor Luka-clone.  You thought you won and . . .


Dogpile on the wimpy masochist!

Well at least his winning prize is to be drawn more like a heroic adventurer and–

Good grief!

—how long is that!  No wonder the monster girls were all so keen to keep him around as a toy.

It’s a bit of smoochy-smoochy with Selene while Makina and Anua lick his nipples, and Sharia and Lilith play with . . . that anatomic anomaly.  It doesn’t look so bad Luka-clone.  Five gorgeous girls, jammy bastard and all that.

Um, Sharia’s just sucked up your cock in her wing tentacle thing.  Okay, so it looks a little weird, but it’s not all that . . .

Oh, and Lilith’s just put her tentacles in your ass.


Spurt spurt.

I think the Violated Hero artist really likes drawing cum splatters.

Think on the bright side Luka-clone.  While they’re molesting you they aren’t bothering other human beings.  Think of the greater good.

Oh, Lilith’s tentacle is swelling up.  In your ass.

Greater good, Luka-clone.  Greater good.

And fade to black.  The end.

In the MEHydra vs VH4 battle I have this five-on-one scene from near the end of Succubus Summoning 101 (please buy the book, Verdé will give you nice dreams if you do).  As lovely as Verdé and friends are, I’m going to give VH4 extra style points for the wing/tentacle/suction tube thing.

Overall, the last Good End looked remarkably similar to the many preceding Bad Ends.  Maybe that’s just how Violated Hero rolls.

But we do still have those missing CGs from Sharia.  Is there an alternative – better – Good End hiding away?  To be continued . . .

Friday, January 31, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 4! part 16

The walkthrough of Violated Hero 4 moves onto the final area (we think).  And the usual warning – Violated Hero 4 is a sexually explicit eroge.  Please read no further if offended by such things.

First a little recap.  We beat Sharia, Lilith stole the powers of the demon god and then flew off to take her position as final boss of the last area.  Oh and there was no Bad End unlocked because I suck.  Or maybe Sharia’s idea of a sexy Bad End is to stamp on people’s heads and cast them down into the torments of hell.

Sharia, you’re one sick chick.

At least she’s on our team now as our intrepid ambulatory bag of concentrated semen heads off to the final-maybe-final battle.


Hmm.  Two wandering mook types this time around, or maybe another stats boost monster.


Into the final-maybe-final castle.


Didn’t I see you before . . . ?


Hmm, these scythe chicks are pretty hard.  She nearly kills me on her lonesome.  Thankfully I level up straight after, which saves me having to dip into my limited potion supply (just 2 super potions and no normal potions – the grind beckons.  sigh).

Okay fess up, VH4.  You sent the level designer home early.


And then it’s time to confront Lilith in her lair.


Luka-clone steps up and says he’s going to stop her.

How?  By making her sides split open from laughing too hard.

Lilith warns him of the consequences.  If he loses she’s going to fuck him to death or make him her pet . . . or something like that.  Oh well, some you win . . . and some you win.

It’s not all bad for our intrepid hero.  Former demon god Sharia is here to lend her power.


I don’t think it’s going to go down as expected.  I remember the title screen.  I see chains and much trampling of genitals in Luka-clone’s future.

The three demon king generals are keen to give Lilith a good spanking as well.


As I said earlier: Some you win . . . and some you win.

And then it’s time to battle.


Not sure I’m keen on the Lilith design with the single power eye and magical tail emanations all over the place.  Only 1500 HP, but I only have two super potions left.  Throwing the fight may not be necessary.

As Lilith is now the demon god she also gains the annoying demon god ability of pausing the battle for more posturing/monologuing.


She also heals herself to full as well.  That 1500 HP . . . it’s more like 3000.

Oddly, Lilith’s sex attack isn’t animated.  She asks if she kiss him there and then the spunk heart lights up with no indication of what Lilith was actually doing.  (I can take a good guess).  Even after all four light up I’m none the wiser to what’s going on.  Did the makers forget to add the last animations?  I still think the sex attacks are a wasted opportunity.  They don’t even KO us when the 4th spunk heart lights up.  No matter our current HP, it never drops below 1 from that attack.

Using the last super potion refills my stats and a couple more Sharia hits drops Lilith to the 2nd pause.  Uh oh, and after that pause Lilith’s HP is up to 2000.  With mine at 175 and no health potions left the tedious potion grind beckons.

The random number gods tease me with a sequence of Lilith missing or doing scratch damage and I get her down to about a quarter life before one of her killer moves finally connects.  One super potion short.  Which is a good sign as it means I won’t need to do too much grinding for potions.

And then . . .

Finally . . .

It’s time to be squeezed by Lilith’s intimate bits.


The first intimate bits appear to be Lilith’s rather sizable fun pillows.  As with Hisui – not seeing the Bad End of this.  Lilith gives him a good suck and tells him he’s going to be her personal semen doll.  So nothing’s changed there then.

And then for scene two it’s . . .


Missionary?  I suppose that is the exotic position in VH-world.

The scale is also a little weird.  At least Luka-clone doesn’t look like a chubby little child in this rendering, but the size difference between him and Lilith is a little odd.  Maybe monster girl means size amazonian+ in this setting.

Missionary doesn’t stay missionary for very long as Lilith takes her tail and – you guessed it – shoves it in our ass.  She sort of likes Luka-clone as she tells him to abandon his silly quest to save all humans and be her pleasure slave instead.

When you put it like that . . .

To seal the deal Luka-clone has to fill her uterus with cum.  He does that and still manages to make her look like the main event in a bukkake picture.  I can only assume the ambulatory bag of concentrated semen burst at some point.

Then it’s fade to black.  Not because Luka-clone is dead or being digested or drained, but because Lilith wants him to sleep and dream pleasant dreams of her.

Wait, we did lose that fight, didn’t we?

Then it’s the some time after cutaway.  Lilith beats up Sharia again.  Under Lilith the world has gone to pleasure and chaos with monster girls slurping up humans everywhere.  I think we all know who’s to blame for this little disaster.  Should have stayed at home, Luka-clone.

Lilith gloats over smashing even the gods and then heads down to the basement where . . .


Ooh.

You might have fucked up the entire world, Luka-clone, but it was worth it.

And much squeezing by Lilith’s intimate bits was carried out.  (and we’ll try to pretend those tail tentacles stretching Luka-clone’s intestinal walls aren’t really there)

And they all lived happily ever after.

The En—

What, you want the other CGIs.

Sigh.  Okay okay, I’ll see if I can unlock Luka-clone’s happy-happy, joy-joy harem ending next time.

Oh, the MEHydra vs VH4 round.  It’s a succubus, I’m pretty sure I have this one locked up.  Here’s a tag team of Nÿte and Physalia in case you have any doubts.

I’m not sure what the next post will be.  It’ll either be the Good End or maybe I’ll save that until last and see if I can figure out how to fill in the missing Bad Ends first.

Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 4! part 15

And now we’re getting into the end straight of my walkthrough of Violated Hero 4.  Do I still need to put out warnings on potentially squicky sexual content?

Last off was a little bit of a disappointment as we reached the end of Lilith’s area only to find out she wasn’t interested in a fight.  Don’t worry, I’ll go back and pick up her Bad Ends after completing the first run.

Now it’s time to move onto the penultimate area and Sharia.

I should probably point out at this moment that I’ve never actually properly completed a Violated Hero game.  In the first something went screwy with the game mechanics as it froze up on the fight with the Dragon Girl.  In VH2 I couldn’t be bothered to go grinding for all the extra potions I needed after Xueli flattened me over and over.  And in VH3 I made my character so stupidly lop-sided I couldn’t even scratch one of the magic-attack resistant bosses.

This is not a good sign.  We might never see the happy happy joy joy harem ending and this could all be left open ended like a US sci-fi series cancelled on a cliff-hanger series ending (I fucking hate it when they do that.  At least Joss Whedon had the decency to give each of his Buffy series a tied-up finale just in case the series wasn’t renewed.  Unfortunately the TV channel execs grew wise to him and started cancelling mid-season instead.)

With that warning out of the way it’s time to plough into the “malevolent deity’s” castle.


Ooh a change of music and scenery.


And we’re fighting Gina. (genie?)


The fight ends up being messy as most of my harem’s attacks are dodged and I lose half my HP.  Not wanting to waste all my potions on annoying wandering mook fights I take the potion that seems to eliminate random encounters.

As it’s the last level it’s probably going to be long and complex and . . .



Oh.

The level-designer coffee break strikes again.

And we’re at the throne room.


Sharia is waiting.


She mentions no human has challenged her in centuries.  She also notices Lilith hanging around and calls her out.  Lilith shows she means business by revealing some hidden power.


I still have the feeling Luka-clone is completely superfluous to this succession battle.  Sharia tries to intimidate him with her magic force, but it ain’t doing.  Because it’s time for the not-so final battle.


Oh, only 1500 HP.  We have super potions.  I reckon we can take this.

And yeah, it’s never just a final battle as Sharia pauses things halfway through.

And obviously she’s going to go all evolved, or One-Winged Angel, or . . .


. . . stay exactly the same with her HP back up to full.  That feels a little cheaty.

I knock her down to about 300 HP before there’s another pause.

Now Sharia’s really mad.  She’s going to get serious.

Nope, no weird transformations.  Still a demon girl with wings.  Even though she’s back up to full health again.

It doesn’t matter.  I keep bashing away with Lilith and this time there are no pauses before Sharia hits zero HP.

But obviously we don’t want to see the consequences of winning the battle just yet.  Time to save and then load the earlier save.  How will Luka-clone fare against the malevolent deity on his own?

Badly, obviously.

(5 damage)

As it’s the total shame loss we don’t even get a sexy Bad End.  Sharia tosses us into the pits of hell and Luka-clone is tortured for decades.


As with VH2, we’ll have to work a bit to earn our sexy Bad End at the hands of the not-so-final boss.

Losing after the first pause gets the bad Bad End again.  It looks like Sharia really wants us to work for our sexy.

And after the second pause . . .


Head stamped on.  Dozens and dozens of years of torture.  Plain End scene.

Do you even do sex, Sharia?

Guess it’s back to the saved game where we won and the inevitable twist where it turned out we didn’t win.

Oh we did win.  But then Lilith, who’s been running the whole coup all this time, steals Sharia’s power to become the new demon/god overlord.


The other devil kings look on in horror as Lilith claims the throne.  She was fed up with Sharia’s world as it was too well-organised and boring.  She wants a bit of chaos.  She wants to raise hell.  The world is going to burn, yadda yadda.

Not yet.  One man steps up . . .

Unfortunately it’s our faithful ambulatory bag of concentrated semen.  Lilith, tremble in your high heels.

Actually dude, I think she’s giggling.

Lilith buggers off to another castle and challenges Luka-clone to go after her.  I guess she still wants to play with her pet.

It’s not all bad as de-powered Sharia wants to sign up for the Lilith lynch mob.

Actually it is all bad.  Where the fuck is our sexy Bad End?  There wasn't one in the last post.  If I don’t put up any hardcore pics of smut this time around I'm the one that's going to get lynched.

I go back to my save game and try knocking her down to various life totals.

Head stamped on.  Dozens and dozens of years of torture . . .

Okay, what if we don’t raise a finger against her at all.

Head stamped on.  Dozens and dozens of years . . .

Sharia, you do like men don’t you?

Oh well.  I’m assuming there must be some trigger condition for her sexy Bad Ends I failed to trigger.  Another for the NG+.

Next time can we get some sexy pulleeze Violated Hero (totally claiming these rounds as MEHydra’s, BTW)?

Actually, I had a peek ahead.  We’re good.

Come back in a couple of days where we definitely, absolutely and finally will get squeezed by Lilith’s intimate bits.  Guaranteed.

Monday, January 27, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 4! part 14

This is part 14 of my walkthrough of Monster Girl eroge Violated Hero 4.  The usual warnings apply.  If you’re under 18 or have stumbled here by mistake and are revolted by the thought of tentacles in the ass, please turn around and show yourselves to the exit.

Last time around we took down the 3rd of the devil kings, the tentacular Neptune Queen Selene.  That leaves just one devil king remaining and this is going to be a little awkward as she’s been following us around as a member of the party all this time.

Yes, it’s finally time to get squeezed by Lilith’s intimate bits.

First there’s the matter of recruiting Selene, which should be easy given the agreement she had with Lilith.  Oh, she wants a rematch - this time a one-on-one “dirty” match with Luka-clone.  By dirty she means hentai sex battle.

Hmm, I’m intrigued.  Maybe . . .

Lilith isn’t.  There’s a “malevolent deity” to battle.

Selene switches to serious mode and tells Luka-clone they don’t have a chance of beating Sharia.  She wonders what Lilith is up to.

Afterwards Lilith mentions the powers might have aligned to give them a chance.

And then it’s over to Sharia in the castle, who’s just noticed it’s gone quiet.  Oh dear, it sounds like her and Lilith cooked this up just to have a fun fight.


Back to the map screen and, hello, another arrow has appeared.


This opens up a third screen, this time with just two areas, one of which appears locked.


This first is obviously Sharia’s, but what about the second?  Does Violated Hero 4 have a secret enemy kept close to their chest, or is that the area the player needs to complete to get the happy happy joy joy harem ending?

Before that we need to do Lilith’s area to recruit Lilith, who is already in the party anyway . . .

Ah, the third element of the dragonkin – ice.


Halfway through I realise I forgot to finish off Selene’s area.  It doesn’t matter.  I’m going to have to go grinding for super potions anyway.  I follow the path to the exclamation mark at the end and . . .


There’s no one home.

Well, we knew that anyway.  She’s already in the party.

Uh oh.  I have that ‘done things in the wrong order’ feeling.  Lilith mentions it is her area, and she might have enjoyed springing that surprise on us, but now the cat’s out of the bag it doesn’t seem worth it.


So no fight.

Which means no Bad End.

Hmm, looks like we’re going to have to wait a little longer before being squeezed by Lilith’s intimate bits.

Nothing for it but to 100% the areas visited so far.  While going through Lilith’s area I get careless and frozen solid by one of the dragonnewts.  I hit the continue option and then hit what I think is the status button to see if my level is still the same.  And . . .


You know that feeling when you play through most of a game without realising you’d missed something really obvious.

Amu is in this game!!!?

Amu was one of the generals in VH2.  I’d heard a rumour she was in VH4, but as the same people seemed to be saying she follows you around, I assumed they’d mixed her up with Lilith.  But no, she’s in the game and running some sort of potion store.  I’m not sure how this works being that I have no money and don’t know what any of the potions do anyway.

The first option gives me a super potion.  The second gives me 3 super potions.  That seems quite convenient given that they seem essential for the harder boss fights and Sharia is guaranteed to be a brick wall.

On the way out Amu knocks us out and then gives us a footjob after we wake up.  All part of the service.


And I guess that’s it for this segment.

Does this mean we don’t get to be squeezed by Lilith’s intimate bits?

Nope, guess not.

Bugger.

Oh well, onto Sharia and an inevitable sticky end.